aww that was soo cute!! i almost cried!! it was adorable! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!!

Awww that was really cute i loved it really great job! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !! ! ! ! ! !! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I thought that tis was an adorable songfic!!! It was really unique!!! I hope u carry on writing songfics - Here is a suggestion - If u have ever heard of the song 'Holding out for a hero' by Bonnie Tyler (also at the end of Shrek 2) I think that it would be a really good songfic to use since Harry is a 'hero'. I've told some others writers about this idea but not had time to post it as a challenge as I've not had the time to go into detail and stuff. But I hope u will read this and then listen to the song and see what I mean. U can find the lyrics for it on most lyric sites. I really really really hope u will write this songfic as this 1 was really good!!! Hope 2 hear from u soon!!! From fellow Harry/Hermione shipper

i love that song. but the context was screwy and you obviously tried WAY to hard to make the song fit the story. some songfics are better even when the song is a little odd

i love that song. but the context was screwy and you obviously tried WAY to hard to make the song fit the story. some songfics are better even when the song is a little odd

That was a cool song. Nice job. I realy liked that.

that was an interesting story. i think that you have done better work, but i'll give you interesting.

A bit weird, but a good weird nonetheless. An interesting integration of factors.

Well, that was good. A little weird I'll admit, but still it was very nice to read Bit OOC. but at the same time it's not completely out. You wrote a good story Great song by the way!

Not bad... Not bad at all... Not an easy theme. Maybe we could have a little more background about that bet ina second chapter or in a prequel? Hmmm ? I'd like that very much I think...

Keep going...