TiredEyesSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/09/08
Wow, interesting turn of events... :O definitely going to keep reading! ^_^ |
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I really enjoyed your story. It was so absorbing that I sat and read the entire thing in an evening.
There were a couple of parts that I really enjoyed. The type of bond and how it was achieved was refreshing. So many stories, my own included, have the usual ways that there bond forms. Yours put forth a very different perspective that worked very well.
The character development was done in a fine fashion. Nothing seemed contrived, and I found myself emotionally invested in their plight. That is a gift that so few authors posses.
Keep up the great work and I am looking forward to the chapters where they are at Hogwarts amongst the barbarians.
Cheers!
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aditivatsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/07/08
I have just started reading this story and i m simply loving it. Thumbs up for u |
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lampessaSigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 04/01/08
I know this is an older fic, but I'm enjoying it. I think the idea of somehow tying Harry into the Weasley family protections while damping down his connection to the Dursleys is fantastic. I haven't read anything like this one and applaud the originality. I read plenty of H/Hr fics and must admit I greatly prefer stories like yours, where the Weasleys, Ron and Ginny in particular can be supportive of Harry and Hermione getting together.
The reason I'm reviewing is the Author's Notes at the beginning of this chapter... "I chose those examples because, frankly, they are emotional issues and my readers would understand the point Harry and Hermione were trying to make, that there never is, and never will be, any excuse for condoning or submitting to the goals of fanatics, however they’re phrased...." Good choice. Very well said. What you said later was the best, though... "So please, stop lecturing me about who’s right or wrong in the Middle East; I’d be just as happy if all the sane people pulled out of the region, put up a 100 foot wall around the fanatics on BOTH sides, and then filled it in with concrete." Wonderful idea. Ironically, non fanatics know that it's not right to do this. They know that if they actually did dump a bunch of people who feel they are justified in doing anything to others no matter how painful, brutal, humiliating, dehumanizing or deadly the act just to achieve their own goals into a solid concrete prison then they (for some reason) would then be the fanatics who hate fanatics and by their own reasoning would have to then jump in before the concrete hardened. Ugh, the world.
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Wow, I loved the story, it was really sweet and well written. Congratulations! The intimate parts were really nice and fluffy, simply perfect. And I loved the way you wrote Luna. Keep writing like that |
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Jade EyesSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 19/12/07
ahahah! now i understand where Molly was coming.. i thought in chapter 5 she was just being irrational.. so anyways this chapter covered it good :-) i like it |
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Jade EyesSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/12/07
queen's gambit hehehe.. well one of my fav moves really.. i wonder if i could ever play weasley |
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manitildeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/11/07
Luna is awesome, that's all I have to say. Well, that and poor Harry. He has the Voldemort, Sirius' death, and everything Dumbledore said haning over him, but now he has Luna telling people he needs to have sex. |
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NERVSGCSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 22/10/07
This is a really good story. I like to read stories with Harry and Hermione together. Harry and Hermione forever. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/08/07
I thought this chapter was really good, explains a lot of things about magic sex |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 19/08/07
very good chapter quite enjoyed the end with the headmaster very impressed |
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ScoutSigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 26/07/07
This is the second time I've read this fic, and I enjoyed it just as much this time as I did the last.
I love your writing style and well put together plots.
I hope DH doesn't kill off any of your impulses to keep on writing H/Hr fics.
Friends in Harmony!
scout |
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shshshSigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 25/07/07
Nice fic there ... so are you planning to write more fluff or smut after DH ? |
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RadsterSigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 12/06/07
Wow. This is a really good story, both in the execution and the wordplay. You've got some talent there! |
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Like I said it befeore great work, well written fic, a different aproach of the summer holidays before the start of the trio's 6th year at Hogwarts. Hope you continue writting the sequel!!!!!!! |
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