THAT WAS REALLY GOOD!!! HOW COULD THEY DO THAT TO HARRY!!!???!!!

hurry up with the next chapter! please please please. hurry up

wow....good story...not good that he's stuck in Azkaban...he'd better get out soon!!!!! Keep writing and update soon!

Nice story so far. Bit short, but it's how you write I like how you described everyone's reactions at the announce of the 'death' of Harry. Keep writing!

It doesnt tie in with the plot well...I think your writing can certainl be improved-a lot. There were points in the chapters that made me raise my eyebrows and think 'illogical'. I think im the only voice of dissent though...*shrugs* Maybe ive been reading too much...

Poor Harry...does he ever get a break? Hopefully someone can save him!

i have to say that i really like your story so far!!

OMG crucio!! Poor Harry how painful! Grr i hate Fudge! Hope he gets out soon and gets to talk to Hermione... Love the story so far, please please please update soon! I Can't wait to find out what else is going to happen!

Well, I can see where this Fudge isn't going to survive this story. There's no way that Dumbledore is going to let this one alone, so he's going to bring out ALL the big guns.

Fudge will be lucky to get out of the Ministry alive. I can also see Harry telling the entire Ministry EXACTLY what they can do with themselves when he DOES get out...

oh no. Nice job on this story. Looking forward to reading more.

God, Summer pains is definitly the right title for this fic. Are you sadic or something else ?

Just update soon to let us know

An interesting start, but this story needs a lot more polish. First off, the whole point of Harry being stuck with the Dursley's was that the Death Eaters couldn't get to him there because of the protection from his mothers blood. Second, from OOTP, we know that the order was watching the place closely, thus the Order would've swarmed the place immediatly when Death Eaters showed up.

Also, your confrontation with the Dursley's rang false, they've treated Harry like shite for 15 years, a recitation of their misdeed's is unlikely to make them show remorse for their actions, especially not as quickly as you portrayed it.

I thought you had everyone's reactions spot on in the second chapter, but it just seemed a bit abrupt for all of them. But a good take on the characters.

As for the fourth chapter, Dumbledore is the Chief Wizard of the Wizengamout, he definetly had the juice to keep Harry out of Azkaban until the trial. As for Fudge, after the events at the end of OOTP, he would be more likely to kiss Dumbledore and Harry's arses and try to make points with the public than pull what he did. Nobody is going to raise to big of a stink over Harry using Cruictacius in a duel with Bellatrix, especially an uneffective one. Also remember, quite a few Aurors are in the order, so would be able to keep an eye on Harry even incarcerated.

While I felt you've made a few technical missteps on characters and conventions in the Harry Potter world, and I think they your story telling could use a little polishing in some of these chapters, I would overall have to say this was a good effort and I'm looking forward to seeing more.

You have to get Harry out of that place. Why didn't the other put up a fight for him? They just let him get taken away. What kind of Aurors do they have here? He's already very injured and then they beat him up some more!!?? That's child abuse. I hope you continue this soon and I hope Fudge gets what coming to him.