AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 23/10/05
YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE CHAPTERS I HAVE BEEN WIATING FOR PRACTICALY 1 YEAR! |
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hawkgirl11Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 22/06/05
that was amazing but sad  i loved it i thought u could update it a little more because i wanted to read more. i have read lots of harry potter soties but this is great please go on with this story because it was amazing. u might want to have some happiness but it is rather depressing otherwise it was good. u r talented and should write a lot more  i personally thought it was the best story ever!  amazing fantasic and truely bloody fantasic |
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YOU EVIL PERSON!!!
How could you possibly do cliffhangers like this?
You at least have to finish this before the sixth book comes out.
PLEASE!!! |
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aster10Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 22/03/05
I am unimpressed. Your characterization is not spot on. Dumbledore would have moved him from St. Mungos to 12 Grimward place long before Fudge had a chance to do something as outragous as slamming Harry into Azkaban.
I am sorry but I am having a great deal of trouble suspending my belief about this one. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 06/01/05
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 06/01/05
is harry going to love, you can't kill him! great chapter... lovin it!  four thumbs up... hang on, thats not right... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 06/01/05
great story... I hatre death and how could you even think of killing off lupin? kidding, lovin it! |
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 I HATE Fudge!!!I do! I do I do I do!!!!  Poor Harry!!!Please you absolutely must update as soon as possible!!!! |
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Gandalf87Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 10/11/04
great story. i really hope that you decide to continue it. i see that you haven't updated it in a while. i am really looking forward to a new chapter. |
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Oh my God! Look at her-Oh! Er...I mean that was a great chapter. Very sad, yes, in the fact Harry was so beat up (so he is not dead ;P). But he was alive, at least at the moment. At least Harry managed to confess is true feelings to Harmione before blacking out. Quite the surprise that he was still alive (not really). But at least he was able to get out and to hermione's house without loosing it. I would really like to see how this turns out. Good job and keep it up. |
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Good chapter. I've just started reading your fic saw that it was pretty good. Thought there are more chapters to go, I decided to write review for this chapter, seeing how you kind of have a lack for reviews, and I would like to add to them. The first two chapters were actually pretty nice. It was definitley a change to hear the Dursleys being nice to Harry, but I guess even they can change themselves if given the right reasons. Too bad Harry's smal piece of happiness was short lived as the DEs attacked and killed Harry. But we all know he has to come back, remember the Prophecy. Unless that will not be playing a part in this fic. Anyways, I would just like to say tht I lke what I am reading. I am sorry to see that you have little reviews. Well, good chapter none the less. I will see if I can review your next chapter too  . Keep it up. |
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bigp_110Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 04/10/04
good story but wouldn't the dursley's be dead since there were no suvivors of the attack |
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Good story developing thus far, i like the way you show how much Fudge really does only care about his image... excellent writing.. update soon! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 19/09/04
great story... cant wait to see more... keep the chapters coming... |
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