AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/05/07
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/09/06
I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT PLEACE UP DATE I LIKE YOUR STORY !  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/10/05
I believe the movie your looking for is "Chasing Amy" by Kevin Smith. It's very good, actually. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/08/05
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utkari02Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/01/05
Cute. I don't know which movie you're refering to, though. Not long enough for my taste, but decent writing. |
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Really short and to the point but cute! I think that perhaps a sequel is in order. Hermione heard him, stopped, stared at him, they kiss...
Anyway, great fic! |
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Amity RaeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/09/04
I couldn't get the 'Ettiquette' link to work and this is my first review so hopefully I won't do anything wrong.  First of all, since I'm not sure how much of a critique this is supposed to be I'll keep it to a minimum. Now on to my lame review. As a stand alone short story I felt lost and needed more. But when I read it again as if it were a short scene within a larger story I found it to be sufficent. I thought the '...long, tight, meaningful hug." line from Hermione was a bit out of character and all the dialog in general seemed to be rushed. I know this was only supposed to be a short fic. But I still wanted more. However, the writer did accompilish their goal and the style is emotionally efficient. As a writing excercise the tone and detail is nearly perfect. Overall the author did a wonderful, light piece. Thank you.  |
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 and what a review that was! Wow, a nice combination of constructive criticsm and compliments. Very nice. Your review really made me think  Thank you for both the constructive criticsm and compliments.
~Candice |
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sertadSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/09/04
Is it over? I thought it was really good but it ended. 
You must continue! |
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Awww... yeah, 'fraid so. I'll think about continuing, and I'll email you if I do  Thank you for the kind words.
~Candice |
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I was just on fanfic.net, adn why do you have your name switched about? Anyways, lovely, as I may have said, (I don't know) wonderful! |
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Um, well, MariaCandice was taken already here, so I had to change it >.< Thanks for noticing, though! lol
Thank you for the lovely words, also.
~Candice |
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2buxSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/09/04
a very sweet story. i thought it was lovely. the only bad thing was it was too short. not that was
a bad thing, it's just that i was left wanting more. but i guess that's a sign of a good writer. |
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Awwww, thank you! Yeah, too short, I know *hangs head in shame* But I like short fics. One shots is mucho exellente.
Oh my Thank you.
~Candice |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/09/04
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Awwwwww!!! Well... I'll think about it, and let you know if I continue by email, mmkay? Thanks very much for the kind words!
~Candice |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/09/04
good, could add more depth, but good for a first try |
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First try, huh? It was that bad?  Actually, this isn't my first try. Too bad you thought so >.< Thanks for the kind words, though.
~Candice |
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corianderSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/09/04
Loved it. Loved it . Loved it. Very cute. Good work. |
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Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Awww... thanks
~Candice |
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Aww. That was just fluffy. And a bit sad, actually - I hope he'll tell her - someday. *sniffles a little, then grabbs firmly onto the H/H ship for the uncountable time...* |
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Thank you for the kind words, also. Awwwww... cute... I hopw he'll tell her, too, someday
~Candice |
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I'm not the one to say something bad about a fic but seriously that wasn't good at all.Well this must be a first attempt.This can't be finished with just that.I mean...the only romance I saw in their was that Harry said "I love you" in a "not so friendly way" how will we know what kind of way he said it?I say their should have been more.Of a rating between 1 and 10 i'd say 4. |
Author Feedback: lol, thanks for the review! And no, this wasn't a first attempt at all. See, this was supposed to be angsty. And, if you read carefully, Harry said "I love you, and not in a friendly way" AFTER Hermione left. Thanks again for your review, but I only ask kindly for you to read the story properly before you tell me off, lol.
~dani |
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continue it pleaseeeeee !!! dont leave us like that! your fic is so great ! you have 2 do another chapter where harry says 2 hermione all his feelings !