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Breakfast of Champions

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alisonmuses
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/08/08
i\'m sorry that i don\'t have a review; i\'m just trying to add this story to my favorites.
 

Tammin
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/08/07
I loved the Willy Wonka tip of the hat. Hermione could make a lot of money working with gred and forge. Keep up the hard work.
 

shshsh
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/07/07
That was mind blowing ... I love your fics .... they;re just amazing ... keep writing !
 

Witherwings7
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/01/07
I loved this story. It's always nice to see Hermione bring out the lioness in herself and the fact that the library unleashes it amuses me greatly.
I also love that you portrayed outie belly buttons as sexy. I don't have that type personally but I know some girls that do and they are very self conscious when I don't think they need to be. To see one being portrayed in a positive light makes me very happy and I believe this is the first fan fiction I've ever read that even mentions one
 

Gryyphyn
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/09/06
I wanted to just leave 'Wow' but wasn't allowed. Crap. 'Cause that's the only word that describes it: Wow.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/07/06
hilarious! and that willy wonka thing got me laughing so hard. great job
 

canadianmegz
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/12/05
he he I like it... man that would be AMAZING. ha ha. wow... just... WOW... you have a truely amazing gift and... WOW.

keep it up
-megz-
 

q.thews
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/09/05
I LOVE that password!
It seems that even my pc loved it... it even fainted while i was writing this review.
Interesting story... maybe Fred and George would be more interested in that scrolls... maybe for a new nc17 section of their shop ?

Bye
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/05/05
Your story was very well written and the language that you used to describe and 'show' the picture you were creating is/was excellent. However, I found it hard to make headway through it all and struggled to make it throught the first couple of paragraphs.It was rather too tedious for my liking and perhaps a little too drawn out.
 

fudgie
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/05/05
Not only was that excellent smut, but it had 'pure imagination' in it; the song I've been listening to all day. XD (the cover by Maroon 5 for the new movie)

ahhh, wonderful writing. I worship you.
 

jennyberry_84
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/05/05
i never thought of mione like a these sexy vamp well what i mean is that se even put her homework time of mking hese eatible pantys wow it could happen i mean she is truly smart and everything put is hard to put thoese to together jajaja
 

sparky40sw
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/03/05
What a marvelous little story - magically edible underwear is a very cute little plot bunny - take that one home for breeding puposes. I just started to read your work after intervention and your posts on Kinfire's yahoo group - I think that they will be a treat to read - thank you
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/02/05
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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/01/05
awesome, you a great wirter, keep up the good work!
 

Ramychan
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/10/04
Haha! That was excellent; very original and very descriptive! Nice work!
 

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