This POV seems more like him, now that I can essentially see the wheels turning. Your descriptions of his surroundings (particularly while he was in the quidditch pitch, before the golden trio + Ginny arrived) was once again striking. You have a lovely way of writing, and I'll definitely been reading the rest of your work.  |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you like my writing... I wasn't certain if people would, but I'm glad that some people do.  |
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Awwww...But what happens when the moment's over? By being herself, Ginny probably just led Draco on the first step to deciding his future... |
Author Feedback: I might have to write more later--but I'm not sure where it would go (plotwise). It would probably just be a load of fluff. Or someone could discover Ginny's drawing--that could be fun... Haha... |
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This is an absolutely wonderful piece of fanfiction! I read it the day it was published, and I came back again, because it just doesn't get old! I love fluff. Both versions of the story were amazing, but I loved how you put Draco's thoughts and the kiss between the pair.
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Author Feedback: Hehe, I'm glad you like it... I wasn't sure about this one, because I wrote it to justify 'Fading Lines'. I originally wrote 'Fading Lines' to be a piece of happy fluff, but I got lots of comments about the OOC Draco (to some people), so I decided to show his POV also. |
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This is a really good companion piece to Fading lines. Draco is really sweet and yet not OOC. |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I wrote this one because people commented that Draco seemed OOC, so now his actions are somewhat justified. |
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that was lovely!!! i absolutely in love with it. its beautiful and well written. well done!! amazing job!!   ~M |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! |
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I really like this, it's an excellent addition to the other story! *huggles* |
Author Feedback: Thanks! |
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YAY! Wow, that was sooo excellent, really fantastic. You are an AMAZING author, and I am so pleased to have read your story! Please please please put out more stuff, I really look forward to reading more from you. You managed to keep the story short and meltingly sweet, but still maintained their characters perfectly.
I'm awestruck, really, it was breathtaking. |
Author Feedback: This and 'Fading Lines' are the only short fics I've written that I can post on this site (my only other one features a tad bit too much R/Hr...) I have a long fic that is in progress that I'll post here in the future (too sleepy right now). |
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Wow! I like this view better! Great Job! Continue writing! ! |
Author Feedback: Write more? Hehe... Maybe I'll write a sequel-type thing later. I'm writing other D/G stories now--I have an obsession with that ship. I'm sure eventually I'll get sick of them and branch out further. I've only been writing these stories for about a month though--I've been reading fanfiction since last summer, and then I started having ideas of what I would do, so I got around to finally writing stuff about a month ago... It's been going well so far. |
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Rainbow16Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/08/04
Great fluffy story! I like it..............I never knew Harry and Draco could get along like that |
Author Feedback: Y'know, I'm not entirely sure about that either--but I didn't want to have a whole saga of Harry and Draco in my story. Besides, Draco challenged him, and Harry can't turn that down. Well, I suppose he could, but today he felt like playing Quidditch. Heh... |
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EriSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/08/04
Well, i think i'm the first one to review this story 
I'll say the same as in the other one, you did a great job with both the stories, they're really good and they complement each other perfectly.
Hope you post most of your stories here!!!  |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you like them!
I plan to post all of my stories that don't conflict with Portkey's restrictions. I only write D/G (so far, I only started writing fanfiction at the beginning of August, 2004), but I have a tendency to add in R/Hr as a secondary ship, which isn't allowed by this site... Oh well... |
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This was a great story, well is a great story. Better from Dracos POV. Well thats all. Bye then
******* Lukkiseven ******* |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I'm glad some people like this one better--that means it holds its own, in a way. I wasn't sure if it was okay, because I wrote it after I wrote 'Fading Lines', and I wrote it super late at night. (I get strange at night). I also have this problem where I don't like to reread my writing once I write it--I just create it, make my sis read it, and then post it... I keep trying to read my long fic so I can edit it and condense it, but I get bored and distracted, and I end up writing new stuff instead of editting the older stuff... Oh well... |
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