LiVeANdLuVUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/07/06
Nice details....You have a nack for writing.If you ever write another one plz tell me i want to read it!  |
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Wow. I am shaking. Literally. The way you described her as she drew and the way you described their kiss... there are no words. The only thing wrong here is that Draco seems a bit out of character. Oh well, it makes not the slightest bit of differece to me. That was beautiful. And now I'll go scurry off to read the companion piece.  |
Author Feedback: Yea, I know Draco was OOC, I tried to justify his actions in my companion piece though. I'm glad you liked it--I had fun writing it during one of my classes... Haha... |
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[sigh]That was nice...I love the way you turned Ginny into an artist. Naturally, as a culturally refined Malfoy, Draco should be able to appreciate art. |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked it! |
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I love it!!! It's really fluffy, but that's just the way I like my stories - fluffy and sweet. |
Author Feedback: I like fluffy too... Hehe... |
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"drawing her into another compassionate kiss"?? a pity kiss? lol.. come on... i enjoyed draco's PoV.. always did.. good job also..  ~M |
Author Feedback: Thanks!  |
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ElivaniaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/09/04
That was so cute!!! Oh my gosh!! I can't wait to read the second one!!!! |
Author Feedback: Hehe... I hope you enjoy that one too. |
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Great job! Although I didn't understand why draco was so willing to kiss her, but the other story made that clear! Great job! |
Author Feedback: Yea, I wrote this one first because I had a random inspiration, but then people kept commenting that Draco was out of character, so I wrote the other one to justify his actions. |
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AWWWW CUTE! I LIKED IT are u gonna update? or leave it as a one shot... its very cute! |
Author Feedback: I originally intended for it to be a one-shot, I may consider adding more after I finish my other work in progress, which should take me awhile. I don't want to do too many things at the same time--so I'm concentrating on my one big story, and I write short one-shots whenever I get the inspiration. |
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sertadSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/09/04
Awww..that was soo sweet! I love the idea! It's great! |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I'm currently in a Drawing class, and that was what sparked the idea for the story. |
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Oh that so sweet! Too bad i have to go somewhere in like 5 minutes I'll read the companion story a little later! This was so sweet and i love the was you made Draco! Good Job! |
Author Feedback: Thanks! |
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michouSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/09/04
That was so cute. I kinda like it better from her perspective rather than Draco's. Great job. |
Author Feedback: Well, I wrote hers because of an inspiration, whereas I wrote his to justify her story. Really, I think I like this one better too :-P |
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much better and i read the one from draco's p.o.v. it was very good, i loved the fluff at the end and i liked the idea of the barrier thing |
Author Feedback: Haha, thanks. When I applied for an author account, I used these as my sample stories and whoever accepted me said the brief R/Hr references shouldn't matter--but they weren't important anyway, so it doesn't matter if I remove those sentances. I just deleted them and it didn't affect the story flow at all--made me happy. |
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Better from Dracos POV as I said in the one I wrote on the one for Dracos. But it really great! Thats all~
******* Lukkiseven *0****** |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I wrote Draco's POV after this one... I also wrote it in the middle of the night--perhaps I write better when I'm falling asleep... haha |
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EriSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/09/04
Hey!!
This short story was very good, i really liked it.
I know i'm not very good reviewing, but i wanted you to know that you did a great job |
Author Feedback: I think it's a great review! :-P Thanks for reading it! I'm glad you liked it. |
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