A disturbing story but well writen.
keep up the good writing.

cheers

mmm.... very good fic. But Incredibaly OOC for Ron and Hermione. I know allot of people on portkey don't like Ron, so they might think diffirent, but I personaly have no problem with him. I highly doubt that he would even think of anything like this (of course in this context, meaning rape.) and Hermione, she would never let something like that happen.
but appart from the OOC's, this is good.

really good powerful fic. It was just one chapter but it really had an impact on me. Not many authors are willing to dabble in the dark fic area, but I'm happy when some due. These things happen, and although it is a shame and hard to talk about, it should also be addressed and fanfiction is one of the best places to do it.

Ah, I thought this version of the Yule Brawl looked familiar. And yes, I too thought Ron got off way too easily in that story. It was pretty OOC for Ron but not extreamly so - I've seen what some call the Ron and Hermione UST being the WRONG kind and exploding this way .

I think it is very brave of you to write this - a very thought provoking subject. Of course, you aren't afraid to tackle some of these more controversial subjects are you, fenris?

Well done.

ooh that was incredibly sweet! I loved it! good work and good writing!

It was really good, but when women are battered it takes awhile to be able to interact with men, let alone talk to them very deeply and intently and reveal their story so quickly. Otherwise it was great.

This is very interesting. I hope you explore Hermione's struggle against her desires to be controlled and the horrile memories her time with Ron created. To put it in purely sexual terms, Hermione seemed to be just discovering that she had submissive tendencies, but got caught up with the worst dom she could have. If you are continuing this, I would suggest that she struggle against her desires to be submissive towards Harry, but incredibly fearful of being abused the way Ron abused her. Eventually she would find the courage to give herself to Harry, trusting that he would treat her right and never hurt her. And Harry never would. He would treat her the way she wants to be treated, without the pain and humiliation.

wow this is a little different than your usual stories. I don't quite know what to think. I have always loved your stories - they are very well written and your sense of humour is spot on! Great sex scenes as well. On the other hand I am not a great fan of domination, humiliation etc. and I don't like to see Ron portrayed as evil. I like him, altho I am definitely a H/Hr shipper. Hermione, I thought, was in character. I can see her wanting someone else to take control of her very "in control" life. Don't know if I have reviewed your stories before (lazy git) but I have read them all and love your woek. Please keep writing.

At first I was like where are you going with this, so much cruelty is it Harry noo!? But it got better, except the little paragraph about Hermione getting over the whole traumatizing experience was really vague, that should have been more prominent and expanded, you can't have a person's whole healing experience jammed into a paragraph. For every bad experience it takes 10 good ones to make it feel better, for future notice just remember that, other than that keep up the good work

I must say I'm quite impressed with your work. I've never been the most avid fan of Ron's and while I would never have thought rape to be one of his faults (lack of a better word) you managed to make this a very worth while fic. Also I applaud you on not having Harry "heal" Hermione by them sleeping together, I found the need for Hermione to get away to the clinic to be realistic kudos to you. And as to the annonymous reviews I am in total agreement with you, I feel if you want to be negative about something at least use a handle to do it, good lord it's not like you live next door to the person. Anyway, great job and I hope to read more of your work.

that was realli good...@ the start i didnt get it cause 4 sum reason i 4t it was harry wantin to do that 2 hermione.......anywayz rite more plz i luved i

Wow, that was a very powerful story. I think you are a great writer and hope to read more in the future.

Good on you about the deleting anonymous flames...
This is a completely different styled story to what I would normally read, I'm usually a fluffy-smut girl who avoids suicide, cutting, or rape themes.
However, you managed to make this a really well written piece...

I agree. you doing the right thing. I think ron got what he deserved. Good Job
Frank

I absolutely agree with you. If you don't like the story and flame it be "Big" enough to use your name. I read many stories and don't like the story theme but the witing is good, to exceptional and that many times I will focus on. Just my two cents