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padfoot8901
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/04
i love this story i was awsome !!!
cant wait to read more stories u write in the future....
 

Austenlover
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/04
That was a good story. But why did Ron have to interrupt their first kiss? I like how it took her letter to Vicky for Harry to realize his feelings.
 

Izabel
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/04
Very nive story! Really well written and feel. Great work! Keep writing
 

InTheStars
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/04
"He strolled into the empty common room, still fuming that he was punished because of self-defense and retaliation." *scoff* Likely excuse. He had no real reason to punch Draco. Was Draco punching him? NO. That, Kalie, dear, is NOT self defense.



Onto the important part of this review...

Looooove the letter idea. You wrote it beautifully. In my experience with these oneshots, sometimes Harry and Hermione seem OOC to me when they spout of that they love each other. But you wrote it perfectly. I am positively tickled by this.
Author Feedback: Whatever you say, Crys *hehe*
 

xxblue sparklesxx
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/04
"And he could only hope that this kiss from Hermione would be dry and nothing compared to a human hosepipe." That part was sooo funny! This was such a cute fic, you did a really great job
 

Steffi
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/04
Oh, this story is so great! Really, I like your kind to write. Very well written.
 

virtuososvision
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/08/04
Lovin the Harry and the Potters refrence... What is this non-self confidence? Kalie, you are fantastic! I can't wait to read more! LOL
 

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