ooh wow this is really interesting to read the story..like two really important scenes going on at once. very interesting..good job =)

Absolutely astounding. This a prime example of underrated and underappreciated fics out there. Simply put, this is the best fic with original characters I have ever read.

The way you made the two protagonists original characters and still managed to stay to canon should be congratulated. Unlike the majority of OC's in fics, Gevin, Ellie and Tobias have a depth to them and really seemes "real" to the readers.

Awesome story. Well done!

Hello there!

This story has been recommended by [b]Miss Moral[/b] here: [url]http://recs.portkey.org/includes/view_rec_details.php?rec_id=1040[url].

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Oh.My.God.

That is the best story I have EVER read.

You are so awesome, I can't even put it into words. When I get a screen name for portkey, I'll come back and review again so you know my "name".

You made me feel so many emotions at once,I thought my heart was going to blow.

You truely have a gift.

I your story.

Hi, this was recommended here by [b]Miss_Moral[/b]: http://recs.portkey.org

If you click on the story's title, you'll see a link to the "Fic Discussion Forum". Anyone's welcome to post anything (civil and related to the fic) there. You may tell us of alternate URLs for this story. I'll include them in the Rec Search Engine record.

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"“Yes.  I do need Harry.  He is my best friend.  Without Harry, I’m still the eleven year old girl crying in the bathroom.  Without Harry, I’m still lying motionless from the stare of a basilisk.  Without Harry, I am full of books, but empty of kindness and friendship. Without Harry, I am trapped in a library, rather than cheering for quidditch.  Without Harry, I’m filled with anger and loneliness, but no place to heal those wounds.  Without Harry… I’m not me.”"

That was so incredibly beautiful. Your style of writing is so readable and so addicting. It's funny, because haunting the Portkey site like I do, it sometimes gets muddled that not everything is solely focused on H/Hr. This was such a gorgeous "canon addition" and I heartily applaud your ability to meld your own story to seamlessly to canon fact. Lovely, really.

"“Yes.  I do need Harry.  He is my best friend.  Without Harry, I’m still the eleven year old girl crying in the bathroom.  Without Harry, I’m still lying motionless from the stare of a basilisk.  Without Harry, I am full of books, but empty of kindness and friendship. Without Harry, I am trapped in a library, rather than cheering for quidditch.  Without Harry, I’m filled with anger and loneliness, but no place to heal those wounds.  Without Harry… I’m not me.”"

That was so incredibly beautiful. Your style of writing is so readable and so addicting. It's funny, because haunting the Portkey site like I do, it sometimes gets muddled that not everything is solely focused on H/Hr. This was such a gorgeous "canon addition" and I heartily applaud your ability to meld your own story to seamlessly to canon fact. Lovely, really.

I'm dying here. Please write a sequel This story was fabulous. Hurry! Hurry!! Hurry!!!

This was a great ending to the story. Keep on writing (actually, write a sequel.

When are you going to write the sequel??? Please write fast

Please write a sequel!! This was a great, no awesome story!!!

A beautiful piece of writing. I've decided that it's so good that I must recommend it. I have yet to see a piece of action and romance bound together and touch me as much as this fic had. Not to mention the fact that Harry and Hermione's romance aren't even the focus of the story. Neverhtless, it made H/Hr in OotP even more beautiful and plausible. Thank you for your story.

This is a story so different than the others I have read here in portky; keep up the good work!!

WOW!! I have to say that this is one bloody fantastic piece of fanfiction. To be quite honest with you, I didn't think I would've liked this since two original characters played such an integral role in this fic. Usually, I just don't like original characters being in so much of the spotlight. But it worked beautifully for this story.

It had just the right amount of action, adventure, mystery and romance -- from two couples! -- that I crave in my fanfics. The way you intertwined the two plots, heck, it could've actually happened in the book. It was that convincing to me. That was exceptional skill displayed in this. I haven't read many fics where authors sucessfully melded their own story in the book's story.

Simply marvellous and I can't wait to read more from you.

By the way, Leenie was an interesting perspective and well-done original piece considering we were seeing and learning through the eyes of house-elves.

Keep up the good work.

Cheers.

That was amazing. I really hope you do a sequel. What a great story! I was riveted the whole time. In fact, I read the whole thing in one sitting. Tremendous job.