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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/11/04
Great story Very original... I enjoyed it immensley!! I wasn't sure who's POV it was until the "wings". Excellent job!
 

kronos2785
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/10/04
WOW!!!!! That's all I can say. I thought it might have been Hermione taking a trip to see Harry or something, I didn't guess Hedwig. WOW!!!!!
A wonderful piece of literature, It doesn't deserve the title of Fan Fiction, which seems to imply poorly written fantasies. This is almost a work in it's own right!
WOW
Scott
 

Lajo1013
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/04
Wow, that was good. Different than most fics I have read. Took me a minute to figure it all out...Hedwig flying to the Dursleys no? At any rate, I liked it alot. it was a little short (I like loooooong fics) but great jog. Off to read your other fics =0) keep up the good work
 

Chaosblades
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/09/04
I love it. And now I love you for writing it.

No one has ever done a fic from Hedwig's persepctive so perfect.

Please continue...?

Either that or just keep writing. Like your work, like your writing better. Hope that isn't too confusing.
 

usha88
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/08/04
That was awesome. I would have never guessed it was Hedwig until it said something about wings. Why didn't Harry want her there tho? I was confused about that. Nice details!
 

Tic-Tac
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/08/04
Wow. I don't know why this hit me so hard, but it did. Great job - I loved Hedwig's perspective. I have to bow down to your originality. Wow.

Keep writing.

-Lauren
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/08/04
I wonder if Petunia would go. You see I have this idea that even if she did not like her sister, she has at least a little bit of room of love for her nephew. After all how'd he survive to the age that he is now. But then again that's just me. Good fic.
 

rufuscoperpot
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/08/04
Wow, excellent... I didn't see it coming until the end. Good job.
 

Starlight623
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/08/04
Very cute! I wasn't sure who was speaking at first, but when I read " I angled my wings to compensate for the wintry gusts" I finally figured it out. It was good of Harry to invite the Dursleys, but I can't say that I would have. Excellent work!
 

SummrMagic
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/08/04
K...my guess is that it's in Hedwig's POV and she's taking it to the DURSLEY'S! boooooo....lol!!
 

fenriswolf
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/08/04
A very wise bird, at that...very nice, well-written Hedwig POV piece, the line about the 'cars parked just so' was a nice turn of phrase. Good work.
 

Joogie
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/08/04
*laughs* That's very, very cute. I love the idea of Hedwig's perspective. And Harry's very magnaminous, with that "Love" at the end, isn't he?

Lovely vignette.

~Nelli.
 

HarryWouldBeAPaladin
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/08/04
The couple receiving the letter are the Dursley's, right? Very interesting, had me totally on edge as to whose perspective it was. Definate thumbs up!
 

Alorkin
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/08/04
I liked it. I didn't realize the messenger was Hedwig until you mentioned the wings. As for the people, as soon as Mr. Dursley spoke, I knew. I liked your last line. good job! Alorkin
 

HM
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/08/04
Interesting? POV I've never seen a story told form an owls point of view (more specifically Hedweg's) but who was the recipient of the owl? Was it the Dursleys? Well anyway Great One-shot!
 

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