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I really like that. Using the biblical passage to structure the story worked so well, and the plot developed believably. Draco and Ginny both stayed in character, too. Well done! |
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I liked it!  I wish I could say more, but I suck at reviewing...and I'm kind of tired. So do forgive me. |
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 This is perfect.This is what could happen if D/G was to occur in Canon.Well done.The introduction is superb. |
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Awww...I love the inclusion of the Bible verse. It's nice to find a Christian fanfic author who's really into her religion. The irony is, Ginny and Draco's love was true because it fulfilled and broke the verse with the phrase, "Endures all things." Their love was strong enough that it's endurance counted for more than any of its other virtues. Have I told you that you rock? Well, you do, ever so much! |
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Awww...I love the inclusion of the Bible verse. It's nice to find a Christian fanfic author who's really into her religion. The irony is, Ginny and Draco's love was true because it fulfilled and broke the verse with the phrase, "Endures all things." Their love was strong enough that it's endurance counted for more than any of its other virtues. Have I told you that you rock? |
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 This story was unbelievably beautiful in every single way possible. Every, just EVERYTHING fit in so well! I loved everything about it, this is seriously one of the best stories I have read in a while.
I loved how you portrayed both Draco and Ginny perfectly. They were realistic, really canon. I mean, Draco hasn't been secretly abused... Draco adores his parents (Lucius spoils him and Narcissa sends him boxes of sweets from home! Draco can bully his dad into buying anything he wants...) and the way he reacted toward his father not managing to escape and his mother's murder were completely plausible. The only way he would have turned against his father would have been from accepting that his mother's murder was all right.
Normally I get really sick of authors fitting in that little passage from 1 Corinthians basically because I think it's overused (there are SO many other really good verses from the Bible too) but I really enjoyed the way you wrote this fic.
Anddddd... really sweet ending!
Sorry about the long review... that's how much I love this story! Well done!
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/09/04
wow im speachless. that was absolutely beautiful! your interpretation of love in the d/g relationship was exactly how i imagined it to be if ever canon. i agree, you should have more reviews  keep up the good work |
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Oh my goodness, this was a great fic!!! I loved how you had their character's down so well! Harry was a bit mean though  The thing I really like about this fic, is that Draco wasn't really "redeemed" and that he was still his snarky evil self ^___^ I was over at fictionalley.org (Harry Potter fanfics) and I was talking at a D/G thread, and there was a question that if JK Rowling put Ginny/Draco together in the 6/7th books, but Draco wasn't redeemed, what do you think of it? That question reminded me so much of this fic!!! Once again, I love this it was great! I can't wait for more! |
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ooh i dunno which emoticon to put it doesn't fit.. that was entirely-Draco. That was what Draco is.. he doesn't believe in anything except for himself.. 'The choice of not choosing' only our Draco can come up with such thing... that was lovely.. You're really brilliant to come up with such story.. Its amazing, and you did a good job for the parts, where you described the meaning of love, of Draco.  ~M |
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Rainbow16Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/08/04
Cute, real cute. I love the stuff you write! Keep up the good work!! |
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*tackles and glomps Daniela*
WHY don;t you have more reviews??!!
Ye Gods, I just knew this would be fantabulous... It's one of those fictions that make you just smile at every single word. It's wonderful, Nilla.
It's so hard for others to understand how Draco and Ginny fall in love (as I've come to realize at that Debate Thread), but you describe their love completely and honestly.
Just, wow. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/08/04
ohhhhhh I loved it. You captured their relationship perfectly. Draca wasn't OC at all which is hard to do in a ginny and draco fic. Neither was ginny for that matter. Your a very good writer. |
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yay! i loved it, especially all of the emotion Draco felt about his family. I like it when he's not always a cold bastard. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/08/04
I REALLY LIKED IT IF YOU COULD PLEASE ADD A SECOND CHAPTER I WOULD APPRECIAT IT |
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