This is quite lovely! I like the imagery you used to convey Hermione's feelings and the Snitch Portkey within the music box was very creative. I really enjoyed this--thanks!

Awww, this is really well written and you did an excellent job of making us forget the angst present at the start with the sap at the end.
Thanks.

How sweet! I only wish someone could make me feel like hermione did! Good story and sweet ending!

That was nice but it seems familiar. did you originally post it on the forum? That was really sweet.

This was sweet! *sniffles. It was a bit short... sorta at the ending, but this was so good to read!!! I feel all WAFF (warm and fuzzy feeling) now. ^-^

Hooray for the happy ending! I was starting to get worried there.

You have serious descriptive powers for cold and damp autumns. I'm from flippin' Arizona and even I got a chill (in August in 110 degree weather). Your abilities also shine when describing the hollowness that Hermione's feeling - what do you do with yourself when your main roll in life is no longer required? You did an apt job of exploring her POV.

Nicely done.

Wonderful! Absolutely loved it! Great job. Very well written, sweet storyline

Awwwww! Short and sweet! Sometimes, that's the only way to go! Nice story!

Very nice beginning! I really loved the way u set up the setting, but if it would be even better if you made the story longer and give more details as to how harry was feeling and how the 2 of them come together.

wow! very beautiful story , beautiful word
you done good job

That's good writing. Way too short though!
Can't wait for another story.

Lovely story - although I know Harry would never leave Hermione for that long!

This story is wonderful so great so beautiful.
A very good story, really! I like it.

This is a very nice piece of writing I thought. Hermione's feelings and the atmosphere of the settings were both conveyed very well, like I could imagine/picture it. The ending very satisfying as well. Thanks!

OMG!!!! This is amazing work her!! BLOODY BRILLIANT!!! I love it!!!!!!! It's so sweet, romantic, touching, and very very well written. Great detail!! This is really realy really really................. GREAT!!!!!!!! Times a million!! I can't belive no one else has read it. It's to good to not read!!! Please please please write more if you can!! Oh I just love it!!