HEY!!!!!!!!!! WHY DOES MR.GRANGER HAVE TWO NAMES? IN THIS CHAPTER HE\'S CALLED ROBERT BUT IN THE LAST CHAPTER HE WAS CALLED MICHAEL. CAN YOU EXPLAIN? (MY COMPUTER\'S STUCK ON CAPS, JUST IN CASE YOU ARE WONDERING)

HEY!!!!!!!!!! WHY DOES MR.GRANGER HAVE TWO NAMES? IN THIS CHAPTER HE'S CALLED ROBERT BUT IN THE LAST CHAPTER HE WAS CALLED MICHAEL. CAN YOU EXPLAIN? (MY COMPUTER'S STUCK ON CAPS, JUST IN CASE YOU ARE WONDERING)

this is very sad but well written plenty of romance and drama

a little strange but it just keeps getting better and better. i can't wait for the next one.

this was kinda boring but i think it will improve soon! keep at it

I reread this story and can't help but realise that they will have a rocky marriage. I can't see Harry ever forgiving her parents. Thank God he didn't see her father's look of triumph when he hit her with the ultimatum.

It's a well done story, but I think that this will crop up over the years with them. As it is, he'll still always have that little question in his head: "Does she REALLY love me? She broke up with me once because her parents told her to. What reason will she find next time?"

This is a great story so was the one it is the sequle to. But is there a sequle to this one? If so what is it's title?

Aww... that was a sweet ending! It was one of your best chapters. Their little speeches to each other were sweet but not so well spoken that it seemed unrealistic for a teenager to say. And the line "If you gave me a piece of parchment down what I felt for you, I'd give it back blank because you're the only one who can read my silence." seems like it is out of a song. In fact, that is one of the most beautiful, amazing lines I have ever read. I would love it if you posted a sequel to this, I have tons of ideas for what will happen next and I would love to see how you write the rest of their story, so I hope you do.From falling star to this I have seen you greatly improve with your talent for writing, and I hope you continue to use this. Based on your work so far, you have a gift that keeps getting better and better, and I can only imagine how great it will be to read whatever you post next. Well done with this story, it was a pleasure to read it.

Ahh, the beginning of the end of this fight between the cutest pair ever. Well done, I liked how she didn't immediatly kiss back. But honestly, who could resist Harry Potter? *I will read/review your final=( chapter soon, but I have to leave for Driver's Ed soon, and I suppose I shouldn't be late for my first class!*

Sorry I haven't review lately, I was out of town, but it was great to come home with more of your story waiting. That was such a sad flashback, Hermione just can't do this to Harry!!! (So, I might be a little TOO into this story...) A random thing, but it is great to see Ron having a supportive view on H/Hr. Good job!

Oh.. It is great~ It is so sweet in the last chapter. The best part I think is actually Ch5 - the last kiss. I can't imagine Harry could come up with a such romantic idea. (because he seemed to be a bit dump in this area)
Please carry on the good work~~

SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL BRING ON THE SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!!! PLEASE PLEASE THIS ROCKED AND I WOULD LUV A SEQUEL!!!

awww thats a really really really really really ect... a cute story and i hope you can continue da story, plz its such a cute romantic story!!! i love this story i wanna add u and this story to my authors, and stories (Fave).

Awww, right some more please. I've enjoyed reading this story. I've been reading it as you update it and now I'm awaiting some more.

A good conclusion to a good story! I'm glad that you decided to post it so that I could read it!