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Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 15/04/06
This is such a wonderful story.... i stumbled upon it by accident.... such beautiful work... you have an amazing way of expressing your characters....
I noticed you haven't updated in two years, so for all purposes this story is probably abandoned.... that is just sad bec i really was looking forward to what happens next.... If you ever happen to update again, i for one will be one hapy person
 

MELISSA
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 10/08/05
Hey why don't you update this fanfic ??

I want to read the end !!

Good one then !!

UPDATE PLZZZZZ!!!!!
 

hermi19
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 26/06/05
Excellent, excellent, excellent! I wish you would continue this wonderful story, even if it's just an epilogue or something.
 

mwood2182
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/04/05
I've been looking everywhere for this fic. I was stupid enough not to add it to my favorites back when I first joined porkey. Soooo glad I found it
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 07/01/05
wow..this is a relli goot story... i see that you havent written in a while.. hope u do.. that was a goot cliffie..but im a very curious person and so i hate cliffies well i hope u update soon..
 

Reachfulhp88
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 22/12/04
wow! you really have some fabulous writing talent! It's quite a welcome change from the normal fluff, because your characters just seem more REAL...not just canon, but real people, which is one of the reasons I am hooked! haha! please update soon!
 

atiqah
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 19/12/04
aaaahhhh...Are you trying to make me scream??...Excellent cliffhanger, full of suspense. I loved the way they were fighting and all of a sudden Hermione kissed him..Magnificent..Can't wait for the next chapter..better be really soon..
 

Urazz
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 09/12/04
Excellent story on H/Hr. I actually do think that they would get together in a similar way like you showed. Keep up the good work and I hope you release the next chapter soon.
 

Bookworm
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 05/11/04
Hermione could do with a right apology to Harry in my opinion...She has acted quite despicably and used his weakness to mask her own emotions...if she is feeling so unglued and is attributing it to the deaths of her family and all other things, then Harry certainly does not need to spend so much time with her. She can do with taking down a peg or two and then being open and honest. Putting Harry on the spot like that is unfair and cruel of her, considering what she knows.

Author Feedback: I felt that I had to respond to your review, Bookworm, because this is one of the most important things in Yew, and I worked my arse off making sure that it was exactly how I wanted it.

That's true. I agree. Though you have to remember, Hermione is very aware of her insecurities at this time. She doesn't know what to do with Harry, and she does feel sorry, but, just like with every complicated relationship, Hermione is starting to see the weakness in him that she sees in herself. Instead of being her normal self, she tries to mask those feelings, like you said, and it's definitely pushing Harry away somewhat.

But you know, Harry already knows what's going on. He talked to her about it. It's weakening him, yes, but that just makes him a few of the truer friends out there. He's willing to stay with her, despite her issues.

Even the saintly characters can be rather cruel, you know (though not purposely, of course)

Thank you for the review! I'm glad to see your thoughts! I hope I cleared that up for you ... if not, then ... sorry. I know I can't please everyone.

-Lauren
 

Hannah VIII
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 24/10/04
My goodness, did they just do the dirty? 'Bout that time. I love your writing style, but I think you should make the dialogue longer and the whole thought process shorter. Still, magnificent story.
 

Dreamer17
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/10/04
What a GOOD story, Lauren. I felt so sorry for Hermione as you described her feelings about leaving Hogwarts to face an uncertain future. Can't wait for updates
 

Izabel
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 16/10/04
I really really like this chapter. The ending was really well written too. You have a great writting. I love reading your work. I just can't wait for more of this incredible story. Thank you for giving me a great time and I hope to read you soon!!!
 

lyve
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 08/10/04
The stories great but the chapters are way to long. Why not cut it shorter??
 

scorpio-1983
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 08/10/04
that was good what happens next i wanna know I hope harry tells her how he feels
 

moglie
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/10/04
I really enjoyed this chapter. The fic seems to bring together the appropriate mix of light-heartedness and fear of change. Good Job.

Just a few random observations:
1. Did you intend to make Hermione's feelings for Harry sound like old fashioned marriage vows? ie the honor and cherish stuff

2. You might want to consider having someone knowledgeable in all things Brit going over your chapters. Brits don't graduate, they simply leave school.
 

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