tom_catUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/04
That was absolutely fantastic, or in the words of Master Weasley himself, bloody brilliant! I had a lump in my throat the whole time because I knew where you were take it.
R.I.P Ron Weasley! 
Tom Cat |
Author Feedback: R.I.P indeed. : ) I was hoping to have Ron's death a bit of a surprise, I'll admit, but if you knew where the story was going and still had a lump, well, that's perfectly fine too! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Wow. You managed to do something only a few fanfic authors can: make me like Ron so much I cried for him. Well done!
This piece is bloody brilliant. You wrote it exactly how I had always hoped Ron would grow up to be: self-effacing, blunt, very mature in his simplicity, and still funny as hell.
Thank you for writing this. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I'm very much glad I was able to capture how I thought Ron would act in his later years, and I'm also quite happy that you liked him enough to feel sorry for him. My job is done! 
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/04
all i can say is, what the heck was that?  |
Author Feedback: A first-person monologue, last I checked.
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Oh my. That's really good. It started out like a letter that seemed like it would have a happy ending. But I never would have saw Ron being dead and speaking from beyond the grave. You've got to write more. I really like this one. It's good and made me tear up at the end.  |
Author Feedback: I'm glad I managed to surprise you! That was my intent, admittedly; I didn't want it obvious that Ron wasn't quite among the living anymore, so I'm infinitely glad I was able to pull it off for at least one reader. : )
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Author Feedback: Thank you. : ) It's really a pleasure to receive such a beautiful review; I'll freely admit that the most prominent reason I write such stories is so I can read others' opinions of my work, and to have someone enjoy it so much definitely makes my day. And I'm glad I redeemed Ron a bit in your eyes - he's my favorite character, somewhat strangely, seeing as how I used to hate him. 
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very good....i could totally picture this coming from ron...you portrayed his personality wonderfully...it was an excellent story! |
Author Feedback: Thank you. : ) I'm glad I managed to pull off Ron's POV; it was surprisingly easy, once I got into the flow of things.
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Oh wow. This was so touching! I loved it! Your writing style is excellent! I really like how you personified Ron, and I am SO incredibly happy that you decided to post this. I look forward to your later works!  Keep it up! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I'm a bit relieved, I'll admit. It isn't exactly the most action-packed story, and it doesn't have all that much H/Hr in it, hence my reluctance to put it up. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though. : )
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Sad attempt? Was that a play on words.
The flow and tone of this piece is very very good...so good I didn't pay attention to any grammar mistakes you may have made. =) |
Author Feedback: You caught me. : ) I didn't quite realize that it was a play until after I wrote it, sure, but I'm glad someone noticed. And I don't think I made any grammar mistakes, but, ah, then again, I've been known to miss them before... 
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Naw, this was a great thing to post, it wasn't to boring. I love short stories or chapters like this, gives us a good chance to crawl around in a characters head. Great job, thank you. |
Author Feedback: You're welcome. : ) I'm glad it wasn't a bore.
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The Ron you created just completely redeemed himself in my eyes. If JKR is smart...this is how the end of the series will turn out. Although I would be sad to see Ron die, this is simply perfect. I can't even find the words to describe what I think about this, my thoughts are so abstract...but it's beautiful. Ron isn't my favorite character - but if JKR follows your character development at all, I will be eternally happy. Excellent, excellent job.