Beautiful.
My face is all wet from tears after reading your story. At first I wasn't sure who was talking. I did think Ron first because of the way you wrote the dialogue, and then I thought it was Harry because you mentioned the Dursleys, but then I got that it was Ron when you mentioned Hermione.
I'm ashamed to admit it, but I'm a Ron basher. I don't like any one coming inbetween Harry and Hermione. I was hoping that Ron and Ginny died so Harry and Hermione could be together.
I first thought that Ron was mad at Harry and Hermione getting together and he was writing to Harry about how he felt. I didn't realize he was dead until you wrote, "Maybe I ate something magic-repellant and thought I could deflect the Avada Kedavra." I read it twice, and then the tears started. I was confused as is to why Ron said that it was his LAST adventure. But then it became all to clear.
I couldn't believe how much emotion this story elicted from me. I was pretty much sobbing at the end, and then lost it with your last line:

"I did it for you."

Wow...Utterly indescribebly touching, made me shiver the whole way through. The raw power of his words, it was...spellbounding...(excuse the pun heh)

And it's really well done, dunno if it was on purpose, the way that you don't really know why he's writing it, and it slowly dawns on you what actually hapenned. Incredible, how you convey the images without actually describing them, but just by skillfully playing with the emotional expressions...

That is so powerful. I love how raw you made him while staying in his character. And that last line..? Man, that was perfect.

oh my god!!!!that is so sad..but it is so good..i mean really..you have talent....i love it..keep going..and please deicate some fics for me..i'm really a huge fan of your work
tear buster..

I'm sitting im my room right now, sobbing my little heart out. I don't believe you! This isn't your first time at a first-person monologue.. This was absolutely amazing! I'm utterly speachless just because you summerized how Ron truly felt in just one chapter...Its amazing because I never cry when I read Ron death chapters but this one got to me real hard. This was heart-wrentching sad... Even though you might not have wanted it to be like that.. I think its wonderful and I'm excited for the next set of stories... Thankyou for publishing this story.. You have made me inspired.. I thankyou so much...

You are a versatile writer. First the hilarious story (Harry the pirate). Then the sweet story (Harry and Hermione's birthday present). Now this one, the deep musing story.

And you get me hooked good. Can't wait to read your other works.

You're definitely on my favourite writer list.

You know, the other day I said to someone that if I were to write Book 7, I would kill off the whole Weasley family just to show how frighteningly powerful and evil Voldemort was. And also to explain why Ron would never end up with Hermione, and Ginny never with Harry.

But now, reading your story from the perspective of a dead Ron, I feel sooo...sad, empty, a strong sense of loss inside me. Now, I think, I don't really want Ron to die.

I would want him to end up with Luna (not Lavender, mind you); she would be a good companion for him I think, plus I think she had a bit of a crush on him in Book 5.

And maybe Ginny could end up with Neville. The Boy Who Was Almost The Boy Who Lived.

It's a Harry substitute for Ginny.

It's 3:08 in the morning now. But I can't seem to stop reading your stories. Next up, A Minute for the Snowflakes.

Aww! That was so sweet! I absolutely LOVED the first person, you wrote Ron so well! It was perfect, it truly was. Great work *snibbles*

Wow. At first I thought that it was Hermione talking..then her name was mentioned and I thought it was Harry. Then his name was mentioned and I figured it was Ron. That was an amazing story. Wow. I can't really find any words to describe it. But just to make sure I got the story...Ron died right? Really great story.

Oh, that was so wonderfully Ron and heart wrenching. I loved it.

I'm glad you decided to post this. It's very sad, but wonderful written. It just sounds like Ron
One silly Question: Did Harry get the letter? You know you as the author have the power to tell me if the end of the story is that a letter like this *magically* appeared on Harrys desk, or if its just all the things that ron had on his mind in the last seconds or, or... I really have to know

*tear*




that was amazing! I cried!

you should sequal and write one from hermione's pov and harry's pov!!

thank you

Damn! I didn't see that coming! *blames it on the late night and long day*

Ron was...great in this. I find that a lot of Harry/Hermione centric stories tend to shove him to the sidelines (note: I'm very guilty of this myself), and even the ones that focus on Ron himself miss the mark at times. This didn't - it was exactly him all the way through.

Thanks for sharing. It was - special, and it made me become misty for a little while.

~Nelli.

It brought me to tears!! I can't beleive how good that was!!

I'm all choked up now!My computer screen is blurry...okay, I can see again. That was wonderful. At first I didn't understand, but the words made me want to keep on reading. and when I realized that Ron was dead, I had to sit for a minute and let it fall into place. It was beautiful, and I loved the entire thing! Wonderful work!

I am crying right now. Wow. I never really thought about what Ron would think or say if he knew beforehand that he was going to die. I am very impressed. Thanks for the emotional rollercoaster. Everyone needs a good cry every once in a while.