orangeUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 21/05/08
and after all this, what will happen to bachelor harry now? i imagined him suddenly disappearing without a trace...along with hermione actually...while i was reading this...would you mind an epilogue? please?  |
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holy shit!!!
that was breathtaking! Can\'t believe something like that could be torn into words.
 Please, say you will write more?
Your biggest fan
 At least, let me keep in contact with you??? |
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Wow!!
Than was one goooood fic - please write more!! -if not on this one, then another? I read on your profile that someone copied you - what a sucky thing! You have my sympathy  |
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mow09Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 06/05/08
funny honestly...i wonder if this was comedy  )  anyway...hermione is really weird in the first two parts |
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RazzcalUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/05/08
Wow. It's been a long time since I've held my breath while reading. It only happens when I'm completely blown away by the combination of words. You have a gift. I enjoyed the story, but I really loved your progressions; your building of thought. Very good job! At times, I thought you must be British and at other times, I thought maybe not. I can't begin to guess your age; although I think you've obviously loved and been loved. You relate the emotions so well. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 02/05/08
LOVE YOUR USE OF WORDS EXCELLENT!!! I\'M NOT A SERIOUS FAN BUT, I KNOW A GOOD STORY WHEN I READ ONE! |
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ihearthpSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 01/05/08
What an amazing fic. Your writing is fantastic. Honestly, I liked the fact that there wasn't too much in the smut department...I feel that fics need much more than that to be phenomenal (not that I don't like pure smut!). But this is definitely on my phenomenal-radar. Beautiful writing, explosive fic. Way to go. |
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ErasigmaUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 01/05/08
Wow! Such an emotionally invigorating story. Beautiful, simply beautiful.
I loved how you made very vivid descriptions of Hermione's emotions and actions as well as those of Harry's. Your writing style and ease of immersing the reader right into the heart of the character's feelings and environment was quite magical. The story was even more poignant because of it. Please continue to write more stories. You're a great author. |
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KaylaUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 01/05/08
I have been reading Harry Potter fanfiction for years now and have never been the most intense Harry and Hermione fan... but this story won me over.
You have such a talent for writing, such a deep knowledge of the characters and a way with words that could persuade any one to believe that J.K. Rowling intended for this all to happen.
Congratulations to the best story I have ever read. |
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I am ecstatic that you finally finished this, I read it a long time ago on ff.net but you never updated, I was worried you would never finish it. Now I am so HAPPY!! |
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Wow. That was torturously exquisite. The emotions were so tumultuous, so real. I loved the part that went something like "Hermione was in heaven. Harry was in hell." That was poignant and so fitting. I commend you on a spectacular story. |
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Wow, where did you learn to write like that? The way you write is just...phenomenal can't even describe it.
Great story but I had to compliment you on your writing, you have a true talent. |
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RicciUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 28/04/08
I read your AN. I thought that the "slut of the year" comment sounded familiar. A very interesting fic. I've never seen a "stoned" Hermione before. She was fun (especially before Ron left in the kitchen scene). I got a little annoyed towards the end with all the back and forth between Harry and Hermione. I was like "either shag or go away already". And with all the build up, I was expecting a little bit more in the shagging department. But, overall, this was a well written fic. |
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Sooooooooooo savage and animalistic... i love it... how intense could that be...... |
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I justtttttttttttttt loveeeeeeeeeeee that hermione!!!! Owwwwwwwww she said everything... she had done just what i want to do for weeksnow with someone... Loveeee it! |
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