WoW! That was a fast read. It was very suspenseful and I can't wait to read more. Update ASAP!!

Ooooh!!! Busted!!! Thank you so very much for updfatin. I've been waiting for ages! This is a well written chapter. The history lesson is consistant and believable, and Hermione sems ready to deal with the interruption. Of course there has to be someone to screw it up. Please give us a new chapter soon. Alorkin

Geez!!! Right when it was getting to the good part. Oh well. I guess there is always next time. Once again, good chapter. Liked how you switched the characters around,with Koval. Hermione actually having some relationship to the wizarding world, but not actually being a witch herself. I still have to say that this chapter was rather short again, but I guess that is how you want it to be. None the less, Keep it up.

Wow! That was really good. Sort of fast paced, but it is good. I can't wait to read more.

Please update now ... i'm waiting ... hurry up ... write the chapter already!!!

i agree that pea-brain was a little cheesy but it was all i could think of a the time.

as for the boyfriend thing with out giving to much away lets just say that Harry had his reasons and they're not what you think.

Bad! Cliffhanger...good chapter, but some of the dialogue seems a bit cheesy. "pea-brain?" I don't really think that's the terminology a bad guy would use. And would Hermione just let Harry throw out her boyfriend without doing anything?

hmm... that's really interesting. A different twist, but very AU! I like it so far. I hope you update soon.

~K.M.

This story is awsome! I love it.

One question, will Hermione be a muggle or will she find out she's a witch??

Nice Chapter, but it was a little long for this update. Not that it is bad, since everyone works at their own pace. One I would really like to ask if you could somehow lengthen the chapters. I do not mind the time between updates, it would be rather excellent if you can do so. Other than the length of the chapters, I must say that it is coming along quite nicely. I hope to see another update soon. Good job.

Just so ya know... you happen to be rather evil. Leaving us at a place like that and all. Just thought I'd let you know...

I loved it. I wasn't certain at first, but I wanted to read more before making a decision. this is going to be an excellent story. Please update soon. Alorkin

Thank you for updating! So what about the pendant around her neck? Why is she all cool with Harry? She was supposed to turn him into the police..wait...they can't do anything What are those wierd creatures...you must explain more! Thanks for more of the story!

please update as soon as possible.
i can't wait for the next chapter.

This is a nice beginning. It's very different. I like Hermione's girl power she gives off. And the ending of chapter two was pretty clever. I can't wait to see Hermione's reaction so update soon!