This is awsome. For some reason this fic reminds me of forgotten realms, if you haven't read those kinds of stories yet, you should. Lats of all I would like to commend you on your good grammer and spelling. The only thing that I would suggest is making your chapters longer. I'm dieing to read the rest!

The plot thickens. I love how their personalities are intact, even though the situation is completely different. I just wonder how they're going to solve this problem.

this is Getting better I like how it is moving and you updated fast thank you

wow!!! great story! i Love IT! please review soon ! keep it up

Ooh pooh. Interesting air battle and the creatures sound pretty cool. Keep up the good work and I want to see some more koval development! Also i hope maybe herms will find out she is a witch who got missed?

Jeez, harry has no dating mojo thats for sure. I sure hope it gets better for him than this. Great work on the back story for the pendant and such. Is koval nevell? Off to the next one! Kudos!

Go Chef Harry! Super spy, super hero, super cook! Great work on the dialogue some really funny stuff, especialyl when william showed up, I almost busted my gut laughing. Great work. Off to read the next chpater...Oh and the fight scene was really cool.

Ha ha! I guess they should have altered William's memory (I think it was William). I guess he's too arrogant to suspect that Hermione might be in her house with Harry of her own free will. And the police had to come at just the wrong moment, too! Anyway, I wonder how Hermione will smooth this over?

oh This is nice all I can say is I can't wait I hope you update this on Faster then Eagle Mountain I like it much bettter and I can't wait for them to fall in love and Harry having to protect Hermione is going to be so Great I just love this Story...... Please again update Soon..................

oh wow.
this is really interesting. I wonder where you will take this plot line. You have it set up well, but you need to continue with it.

Well done indeed! very nice story, you've here. hope you can write more.

Sauron of Mordor

That's one way for a nice evening to go. I really hope Hermione is a witch that doesn't know it yet. If not, I hope she can channel the energy of the amulet or something. Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Still arrogant. A lot like James, in fact. This is strangely familiar, only with James and Lily as the main characters. Ah well, it certainly fits with Harry. If he didn't grow up with the Dursleys necessarily, then he, the Boy Who Lived, would probably be exceedingly y. I can't wait to see Hermione's reaction to one more aggravating incident involving this mysterious, criminal stranger.

I think it's funny. It's suits the way Harry could grow up to be; arrogant. It also shows determination and a desire to do the best she can on Hermione's part. I at least hope Hermione is still a witch.

Please update as soon as possible.
I can’t wait for the next chapter.