This was a good story, surprsing by the title but good.

According to the summary section this is an in progress story. Please keep going. Do you have more of thier first time anal?

Actually, just so you know, Strawberry Fields was a Salvation Army owned orphanage in Liverpool where John Lennon used to go sometimes when he was younger. Just thought you'd like to know. Anyway, good story. (Beatles ROCK!)

Strawberry fields is a beatles imitation band. They are actually really great!

well i guess it was all right. but when will they actually do anything. I mean i have done more with my dog than that mess

Strawberry Fields is actually an orphanage in Liverpool. John Lennon grew up near it and would frequently visit. I think they're closing it down this year which is sad. Nevertheless, no real strawberries involved.

yeah interesting story i am writing this to get to 10 words

omg omg you r the best writer it really made me horney

omg omg omg that is sooooooooo good and made me soooo horney

Oh no! 'manhood'. Ah well, 'shaft' is worse. I love the Beatles.

ok very sorry but you went WAAAAAAY to far on this one! anal sex!! man i jsut lost some respect for you with this story, i love all your other books but jeeze!

anal???? that is very weird, very weird indeed, good writing i'd say

I'm guessing that you, Jack, have to be a teen are you not? What else can explain the kinkiness in this one little chapter!?! Very very good, my dear, dear teen. I can see your hormones are 'coming' right on time! (no pun intended lmao)But it was too short. Believe me. I'm a horny little school girl looking for real juicy things to do lately!! Teens need this kind of stuff! So keep up the anal pleasure!!


oh yea GFT too lol! keep that up as well

This story is great but when are you going to update green flame torch. I've been waiting for the update to happen soon but for some reason you just won't. Why, is it because of writers block, if it is then here are some ideas:
1.Harry finally admit his feelings for Hermione to himself.
2.He tells Hermione after the trip to Hogwarts one night , after Ron goes to bed while she helps him study.
3.She can reject now and accept later or just accept now, it's your choice.
4.Voldemort attacks Hermione's father. Harry blames himself and dumps Hermione for her safety.
5.Harry(being as vengeful as he is) leaves Hogwarts one night to find and kill Voldemort.
6.He gets captured and and killed.
7.The power Voldemort knows not brings him back just as the order comes to rescue him.
8.Dumbledore assembles an army after hearing of Voldemorts plans to attack Hogwarts.
9.Voldemort surprises all by bringing an army of thousands including all sorts of dark beasts.
10.Hogwarts falls, but with no major deaths, both Harry and Voldemort survive having not met in battle because Hogwarts wasn't ready for such a force so they fall quickly.
These are some of my suggestions, you don't have touse them if you don't want to.
But back to SFF, blowjobs and anal sex.... WOW some of the work I've seen, and thats saying something, because I've read all sorts of stories but yours aws the first with anal sex I've seen.
Great work keep it up and continue with green flame torch.

Oh yeah!! That is what I'm talking about!! You should do a sequel!! Like: Cherry Trees or All Around the Mullberry Bush!!
It would be great seeing as this is a Harry and Hermione fic!
Great Chapter!!
Update Soon Son!!