Wow. I can see why she is in Gryfindor. I could never do that to a boy. Even to a boy I really, really like. See, this is why I was sorted into Ravenclaw. I am a self proclaimed geek. Geeks stay together! I am really glad that Lily is so sensible in saying that they both need time. I hope James realizes this, too. Talk about a love hate relationship, but personally, I think those are the ones that always work out. They're so corky!

That was soo sweet! I love fluffy storys! I don't think your story is stupid. I think It was great! *grins*

Aw, I really loved this chapter. It was really cute. Anyone who has left you criticism without any reasoning is probably just jealous of your talent because you obviously have a lot of it. I really hope that you write a fic based off the end of this one because I really enjoy your work. Have a nice day!

That was a really good story. That other reviewer clearly has no taste. i'd really like you to continue!

Don't worry...no 'stupids' here. I'm a lover of fluff, which is why I greatly anticipated the post of the second chapter.

It was all very well, but I would like to make one small comment. I practically fell out of my chair from the suddenness of the kiss after the prefects' meeting. I suppose a tiny bit more dialogue would have been nice even though it still worked out well the way you have it. That's just my personal opinion.

If you do write any more J/L fluff in the future, I'm sure I'll make a point to read it. Thanks!

Shucks, haha what a cute fic!! Lily is so daring with the straight up kiss. hahaha, damn isn't she so lucky to have someone as dreamy as james??? keep up the good work, i don't think your fic is like crap. that person was...how do u put it? oH i know! stupid =D. HAHA, the words came back n bit her in the arse ..ahha okay toodles

Hehehehe, I liked it. The ending was very cute. Got any more of that story up your sleeve? I like reading about Lily and James and there isn't very much on this site. So I usually occupy my time with Harry and Hermione.

*grins like an idiot* That was such a cute story! Really, really adorable and not at ALL stupid. *Kicks whoever wrote that mean review* I think you have a great writing style, infact, I cannot wait to read whatever you post never, and after I review I am going to go and see what else you have written. Well done!

Awwww! that is so cute. How could anyone say this story is crap! this was a great story.

That was a great chapter. I like it, I like it a lot. You are a really good writer.

Aww that's cute but try to make the next chapter longer

Unlikely as this story is, I thouroughly enjoyed reading it. The idea is done with flair, putting a twist on something that could have been very drab. Well done on that one, and I hope to see more of your work out soon.

awwwww, how sweet...god i hate when people review that way, not telling the writer exactly what made it stupid in their opinion. if they're gonna flame, they might as well say why they didn't like it! ...sorry...mean people get me kinda angry...GREAT STORY!

kind of. . . how should I put it. . . stupid.

interestin.... its unusual but diiferent and i like tat..update soon...but dont extend this story into too many chapters