AllieUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/08/06
Fabulous absolutly spiffing. I loved it. My one problem is... More! It's so great I NEED a sequal. :-) |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/05/06
I just wanted to say that i absolutely loved this story! i have read soooooo many fanfics now, many of them L/J fanfics, many of them v v good fanfics. but i have never reviewed any of them cos im not signed up or anything & didnt think u could. but, after reading ur fanfic & also about that ridiculous bad review u got, i had to try to do it cos i just wanted to say that i thought this was great!!  i love L/J fics & this was lovely & so well written, constructed & characterised! well done and please write more L/J fluff - please extend this one!!!! xx |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 27/04/06
i think that that was adorable. the first chapter alone was good enough for me, and the second wrapped it up niceley. way to go for telling off the lame reviewer, by the way. i sincerely hope that they read your note and felt badly, cuz, okay, the story was kind of plotless, but thats the beauty of fluffy stories! the plot is the fluff, right? well, now i'm rambling. i just wanted to say that i thought it was quite cute and it made me quite happy |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 27/04/06
awww... omg thats so cute. oh my god. i just sounded like one of the jappy (nothing racial - just another term for snob or something -- when i first heard the term i thought it was racial... so yeah) whores i go to school with.
but it was cute and Lily's letter was really long and James's was really short. one would think that James's would be super long, because, well, he has liked her forever... and then Lily's would be short... but who cares? its your story and you thought it up.. and it's all you.
now im rambling(sp?) -- so i must cut myself off here before i make too many more grammatical and spelling errors. |
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AlbusOOTPUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 19/03/06
i knows this was written like a million years ago, but i went to a random page and found it. really good and cute, a little fluffy, but ignore all flames. i liked it.
-Albus |
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HelenUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/12/05
Well regardless of whatever that reviewer you were commenting about at the start of this chap thought, *I* enjoyed this. Immensely. Well done x |
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This story is so sweet. I love it! Are you going to write anymore L/J fics? |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/12/04
This is really great. This song is one of my favorites and it perfectly fits the situation. |
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DaleiaSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 13/12/04
Awwww  This is absolute cuteness 
Too bad there's no other chapters though :'(
I'm going to have a look at your other stories  |
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DaleiaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/12/04
This is good  I like this idea of taking the summer to think about it 
Can't wait for them to be in September  |
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ooohhh okay, im stupid it does have a second part! lol...great post by the way!
Lily |
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thats is soo awesome... is it suppose 2 have more? Well anyways if it does, hopefully you post more!
Lily |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 09/10/04
whoot whoot. great story. ahah i think i've read it twice now. LOl. yeahh but i don't think i'd ever get sick of it.. i wish you'd make a sequel or something.. anyway good job. |
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Time sure flies by when you are in love! Even though I thought things could have gone a little slower and with a little more detail, I thought it was really sweet. Why would James not see Lily again? Because of the escalating deatheater attacks? Suicide? Nerves? Oh well, I still like the story and plot. Do you think you could revise it so that it gave the reader a more detailed idea of just what exactly they were thinking over the summer? |
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