luv4booksUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/12/05
that was so sad, lets just hope that that wouldn't happen in Harry Potter 7, and hope that she could be able to be with him before he faces Voldemort. |
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I hate the story it almost made me cry. and you know how bad somthing has to be to make you almost cry. But i am looking forward to you writing longer stories. |
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bobozaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/06/05
I can't say that I enjoyed your story. I do, however, think that it had the effect that you wanted. Let's just hope that JKR doesn't find it necessary to let this happen too. |
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He loved you too, Hermione, he loved you too...
Beautiful, very sad story. Realistic and very in-character; I can really feel how they feel. Simply brilliant. |
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That was sad, but very good. I loved the emotion you put into it. It made me  but in the end I gave it two thumbs up! |
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This story was really sad. I am writing more words now so portkey will accept this review. |
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... truely sad... and so dreadfully realistic. *sniff*
Good work, Jennifer.
You really do know how to write a story. |
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That was one of the saddest things I have ever read, in a good way though, you pulled that off really well. Good job! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/09/04
I am a moth, and like a moth, I was drawn to the bright angsty flame.
I loved this story. I love how you say that it has always been raining since Harry died. Hermione's emotions are very in-character. If Harry were to ever die, this is how I would imagine her to feel.
Great job. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/09/04
You killed him!  Poor Hermione, don't worry, he loves you too! Very good angst. You made me cry. |
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*grabs box of tissiues* oh my god, tht was so sad!  bueatiful, simply bueatifully written. I love it, and i usually dn't like angs. but this was- wow. bueaiful. Great job!
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 That's so sad! Oh, why did Harry had to die?
Well good fic anyway. Keep writing! |
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Oooh, i love it! Very somber and solemn, but still really really good! Did they both kill each other at the same time or something? really awesome, write more like it! |
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NityaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/08/04
Awww..now that's sad.  Love the angst, though. Everything was just written beautifully, so much that you could *feel* Hermione's pain.
Thank Kalie for asking you to publish this  |
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SzaraneaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/08/04
*burst into tears* Jennifer! You killed him. This is not because you said you've never killed a major character before, is it?  That's so sad, but so very good too. Next time you write something it darn better be happier, though
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Author Feedback:  No, Ri, it's not because I've never killed a major character before, not at all. This plot bunny has been gnawing at me for months; I finally wrote it. If you want to read something happier of mine, go check out my other ficlets, although they aren't that great.
Jennifer |
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