beautiful story... i absolutely love the last few chapters... keep writing... you seriusly made me cry but in a good way

Dude, that was SO cute! And I like, NEVER use the word "cute"! So that means something! LoL! oops. Gotta go now, but take my word for it, you should write more. K? Bye!



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Rock On Till Your Heart Turns Black

I just read the story again because I absolutely couldn't help myself. And do you know how many stories make you want to bawl like a baby and make your heart turn into mush while still making you feel like the story didn't lose all trails of actual thought? Very few, and this is one of them.

I'll have you know that this is on the top of my list of must-read H/Hr stories. And I've read billions, so you must be honoured.

Lovely job, David.

Awa!!! What a wonderful story!!! It was very touching and heartwarming!!! I loved it very much!!

Beautiful and excellent story. I like the idea of Harry talking personnaly to each of his friend. I like also that Harry and Hermione don't need big sex or anything like that to prove their love. They both know how important their feelings for eachother are and that's all matters. I hope you understood what I said ! Well, keep writing. Great style you have !

Truly beautiful!!!!!!! I haven't cried so much since Titanic! It could get an Emmy. pure love.....its so great. thanks!

Hermione's REAL Twin

"I realized that if I didn’t see what I’d be like to kiss you then, I might… I might not get another chance"

That was the line- that was the line that made me bawl like a baby. And then Harry asking her to stay-

Very well written

I just said..Wow!

This is one of the best stories on Portkey!
I loved every second!

Harry and Hermione rules !!
Great job!

that was totally sweet loved every minute of it.. i look forward into reading more of your H/Hr work.. keep up the great work

An amazing blend of drama, romance, and even a little angst there. I liked the touch about the Thestrals especially.

And this line: "But even the most powerful person needs people by his side." was perfect. It makes complete and utter sense.

Great job on a wonderful piece!

~Nelli.

Oh, that was great! I loved it! I hope there will be more. I'd like to know what happens next.

That was very sweet! Keep up the great work and write more stories!

That was really cute! and sweet! Love the ending! Great fic!

Keep on writing!

Aww that was very sweet. Im glad he came back to her. I liked that ending, they are so cute Good job.

Hey! how can you say in your bio that you are a horrible writer? This is the best PG story I´ve read in ages and it was all the more surprising to find out that it was written by a 16 year old! No pun intended, it´s just that I felt it so in character and so real and... well I totally loved it and will be looking in the future more of your fanfics. Please do keep inflicting your work on us!