that was so sad, but very good. that makes sence too, it could be possible. i donno. great job
~prongsgurl

really good fic. gramatically speaking its written wonderfullly. it just flows so well, and the slow pace evokes sadness so well, adding to the stories good points. i only noticed one grammatical error so great job. god imagery and word choice. but in response to your a/n i'm certain lily/sirius would have ever occured. james was head over heeels for her. consumed by destiny and i get the impression that sirius would respect that. sirius was also (from what i gather from the series) wild and fun loving, a spunk that never thought of love at school. just thought i'd share my opinion. great story though. your talented.

really good fic. gramatically speaking its written wonderfullly. it just flows so well, and the slow pace evokes sadness so well, adding to the stories good points. i only noticed one grammatical error so great job. god imagery and word choice. but in response to your a/n i'm certain lily/sirius would have ever occured. james was head over heeels for her. consumed by destiny and i get the impression that sirius would respect that. sirius was also (from what i gather from the series) wild and fun loving, a spunk that never thought of love at school. just thought i'd share my opinion. great story though. your talented.

Aww, that story was sad. LOL. It was good, but sad. Sirius and his silly (yet hot) mouth. LOL. Good job!

i say this a lot when a review a story like this, but it just fits this one perfectly. her goes:
AAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! lol

I reviewed this before on DM, but I'll say it again. I love this piece for its simplicity. It's descriptive, heartfelt, and moving without being sappy or flowery. It's the voice of someone who's past the anguished step of pain and moved on to the sort of numbness. Great job, babe.

bithcin' im the frist to review loved it so like dose this go with "The Sacrifice" cuse if it dose i just finsied reading them both and i loved them.