This is such a sweet story! A little sad but you make it sound incredibly realistic. Great work, "feedback whore"!

I love Sirius/Lily pairs. I love James/Lily of course but there's something so romantic about Sirius remaining in love with his best friends love. I was wondering in "The Sacrifice" you mentioned you posted on other sites. I was wondering what some of those were because I'd love to check out some of the stuff that doesn't fit into portkey's strict rules.

I've already read your fic in HPFZ, but i would just like to tell you once more how much I love it. I cried while reading, you know? I love sad, romantic stories, I don't know why. I just want to say, great job, and that you're a great writer. Please, carry on writing more stories!

sad but cute and im kinda diggin the whole sirius and lily having a thing but am i kinda always saw remus as the one who was helplessly in love with lily even tho james was his best friend, but maybe thats just me, i still kinda like the idea of sirius and lily tho

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I dont like hearing ofr lily and sirius or remus or possibly peter because 1- James kinda sorta had first dibs on her and everyone knew how he felt towards her and 2- it takes away from the fact that lily and james had true true love

I think that Lily would never make eye contact with Sirius in her wedding day and I think that she was meant to be with James!! Anyway you're very talented!!

I don't like Sirius and Lily together so I didn't like this story that much! however, you're a great writer.

Are you ever going to update this story again? I really liked The Sacrifice and would love to continue on with it.

Faeries-
This story blew me away. I don't think it is particularly accurate to the Harry Potter universe (and i don't think you do either) but because of your vivid portrayal of emotion. You seem to understand love and the irrational things it makes us do from both male and female perspectives. You have a true gift for writing, particularly romance and heartbreak. Have you ever written any original material or poetry? I would love to read it if you'd tell me.
~Ben German~

I love it! Me and my friend read it together...I’m telling you right now that we cried our eyes out...it was a real sob fest.

Thank you for giving me something to read that is of such high quality...

Yours truly,

Lilliana bellemare

well ... uuuhhh ... even though i think i can accept the fact that maybe there was something between Lily/Sirius (or even Lily/Remus) i don't think that it was that strong that Lily would share *eyecontact* on her wedding day with James ... i think that their love was stronger than anything else ... Don't get me wrong, i liked your story ... but then again that's just my opinion

That was a really impressive story. I liked it a lot. Keep it up.

Awww, it's so sad! Really good writting though! I love it! *runs to read 'The Sacrafice'...

wow, this was really good. and i also really enjoyed your other story 'the sacrafice' very good. i wish it was longer tho!! the story seemed to flow really well. i am very impressed. great job!!
Nikki