AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/09/06
i didnt get th e last part of the story what happened ????  |
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Talon05Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/07/06
It was good, excelent in fact. kind of sad which isn't really my thing, but you wrote it well.  |
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Have been rereading my list of favorite stories today and had to reply to this one again. I don't remember what my last reveiw said, but I adore this story. So believable as two people, grown up and out of place and so real for our favorite characters. Just fabulous. |
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Another great fic. It was interesting at first to hear Harry's heart poured out to an empty chair. Congrats to Hermione for confronting Harry...they both got some peace out of it.  |
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really well written, you discribe everything really well, i loved the beginnig..it shows how much he really cares about her, cause he didnt wanna screw up |
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sintaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/08/04
hi,
your fic has been recommended here by Angel-Wing: http://recs.portkey.org/myrec.php?search_or_sort=
If you click on the story's title, you'll see a link to the "Fic Discussion Forum". Anyone's welcome to post anything (civil and related to the fic) there. You may tell us of alternate URLs for this story. I'll include them in the Rec Search Engine record.
cheers!
sinta at portkey
(fanfiction hunting mod)
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Another reason I couldn't place the title before -- I'd always misheard it as "I am a saint" or something. Hehehe! That ranks right alongside "We built this city on a damn brick road!"
Niel Diamond's not bad, but his music isn't the type I'd listen to from start to finish.
But to relate this to your fic, I'd say you did a good job adapting that song to H/H. I'm truly amazed and awed at how and where people get their ideas for H/H stuff.
~Pen 
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PenUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/08/04
Btw, no wonder that title sounded familiar! I knew I've heard it before, but I didn't remember that it was a song. Now that you've quoted the lyrics, I can hear Neil Diamond's voice in my head. So lemmesee, you like Mandy, Motown, New Order, Neil Diamond. Quite an eclectic taste there!
As for this fic, this isn't bad at all. I'm no writer (at least not of this creative stuff). But on my first reading, this fic was too short, so for me it had too abrupt changes in moods. From the drama (Harry's introspection) to the fluff to the  ending.
And I'm saying that 'cause your self-esteem can take it. You know I love you, anyway!
Ok, ok, I'll go back to researching now
~Pen |
Author Feedback: Why weren't they drinking coffee, though? Do you ever drink chocolate?
I do drink hot chocolate! The reason they were drinking it and not coffee was that the fic is late at night and only crazy people like me drink coffee at all hours and consider it relaxing. 
My taste: Officially, I do not listen to Neil Diamond. At least that's what I tell my parents. Oh the shame! I simply heard it and got obsessed with the line about the chair and had to make sense of it somehow. Does this mean I wrote a *gasp* Songfic?
Short, abupt... yes, know exactly what you mean. I did mean to stretch Harry out a bit more, but since I was outside of my comfort zone, I was afraid of overdoing things and rushed it as a result. Maybe one day I'll flesh this one out a bit more... |
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PenUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/08/04
Wow, that was a different style. I thought it would be a mix of fluff and drama like "JATB" was for me. I liked Hermione taking charge. The ending was typical you -- witty, just manages to stay within PG/PG13.
Rather short for my taste, but I could use my imagination. 
Why weren't they drinking coffee, though? Do you ever drink chocolate? |
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freakgirlSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/08/04
Beautiful. I especially love the way you described the kiss. It is so true, when an author other-analyzes a kiss, the essence is stolen, it becomes mudane and almost sterile because all the joy and mystery has been taken. This you definitely have not done.
I really like the whole atmosphere of this story: it's all very real.
Excellent story. Thank you. |
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SzaraneaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/08/04
Wow. That has to be the most un-Nielle-ish fic I've ever read (except for that last line). And I still love it. It's so...intense, for lack of a better word to describe it. *heads off to gush somewhere else*
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There's Harry - thinking little of himself as usual, and, as usual, it takes Hermione to set him straight. I love that she used a silencing charm on him - I guess it took all her Gryffindor courage to muster up that conversation.
Nicely done. |
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Wow, Nielle, simply wow. This is the kind of stuff that I love. I am very pleased you posted this and will be adding this to my favorites list.  Awesome job. |
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FacadeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/08/04
Now who's holding out on us? I loved this. True that part at the end. Wonderful work LLS. |
Author Feedback: Holding out? What did I do? |
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That was cool. You shouldn't be so hard on yourself. The idea was very interesting and her response to "when does Hermione Granger ever need Harry Potter" was imaginative and poignant. Good job! |
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