great great great! You write in a totally different way! I liked yours fics very much.

Amazing!! I loved it That is some kind of GREAT present for Mr. Harry Potter!! LOL

I only wish this one was long or had another part to it, but it all good. I can't wait to read more stories from you, this one Defintely rocked!!!

I now have a new favorite from you, hope you make more soon!!

decent, not the best ive seen, but decent, keep trying and yuoll get better ('of course' i 'dont' condone wrriting smut, snigger) ha keep going,
Jay

abso-freakin-loutly awesome!!!!!!!! is there a hall of fame for this stuff?

Wow! Very hot! Of course in my experience there is never need for back ground in smut.

Rather short. But what a great birthday present for Harry. What about her birthday?

more sexual romance please, *) *_* BUT good so far

you like sex stories dont you? JOKES! no i find them good too...i wonder if jkr is going to putthat in her story? meh well find out on july 16!!! ok ill sotp now kk bye bye

Great and sweet smut at the same time Wouldn't have known it was your first try except for your notes at the end. Wonderfully written.

Quite good for your first time, although perhaps a little unemotional. I also liked how you avoided embelishing too much, they didn't go at it for three hours and then climax loud enough that you could hear them across the pond.

That was a wonderful first attempt at smut. It was extremely well written. You could just feel the passion and love. I hope you write plenty more of these interludes. I daresay Harry deserves them if not your faithful readers!!

I really liked this little hidden chapter. It was really cute. Great job, and keep it up!

Wow... You're very very disciptive! And thats not alwayz a bad thing, lol!! Love your writting!

Hey, remember me. I read your other stories on FF and was looking around here. Up pops your story. I like it...In case you don't remember me, I was the one who wanted extra hamburgers and for Ron to talk with his mouth full more...which you never obliged *death glare* oh well, I liked the story, keep up the good work.

very nice, i have read this one, long time a go, but here is my review now, i hope you keep on the good work, ok!! i like your stuff!! bye