AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/08/04
..  .. that was sad, but well written just the same |
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LaraSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/08/04
Okay, I just reviewed and out of habbit put Harry and Hermione, not Ron and Hermione... hopefully it makes more sense now... LOL!! |
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NaramiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/08/04
Firstly, it was Ron talking! surprise for me ( I mean a good one), I had already imagined Harry crying (he always suffers) and had to go back to picture Ron speaking. Rons feelings were almost touchable, it helps to know the song Y Lloro, as you said it's not based on it but I kept going over the lyrics in my mind and totally set the mood. I [heart] it when Ron and Hermione are so close like that, that's how I think it is.
"I called you here to tell you that I am letting you go.” That was my favorite line I think  . And so this was a great piece of fluffy. Maybe another one... Entra en mi vida? Te vi venir? XD Thanks for writing |
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CarlaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/08/04
oh, that was wonderful! i love that song, it's so sad. it really fits the fic. and i loved that it's from ron's POV, that only makes it better. BTW, the title of the song is "que lloro", actually. great job! |
Author Feedback: I found out later that the name of the song was "Que Lloro" but still....it fits the fic dont you think??
Thanks for your kind words. |
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LaraSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/08/04
Hmm... what do I think... BRILLIANT!!! So beautifully, elegantly written that I can barely stand it! I totally thought it was Harry at first, but then it was ROn, and that made this sooo much better. Never have a read something so well written about that scene with Harry and Hermione. In fact, I have rarely read any scene, no matter what characters, written as well as that was. Excellent. Thank you for writing this. |
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Wow, that was some pretty powerful stuff. Great job though with the expressing of the emotions on Ron's part. Ron is always characterized as an insensitive git. It's refreshing to see him portrayed as someone with deep emotional feelings that are real and not dismissed. Great Job. |
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EmeraldUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/08/04
Yeah... that song is wonderful! 'Y lloro' means 'And I cry'. I love that song! I love Sin Bandera! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/08/04
doesn't y lloro mean and cry that was really good for a first fanfic |
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poor ron
he'll find himself a nice girl
yes he will
i bet luna is just around the corner
kudos
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