aww. it's so sweet. i like Ron's character in this story. he's so understanding and thinks rationally.

Exellent wow I liked it very much it was very good.
Congratuliations.

Good twist -- I thought it was Harry saying those words! That was very noble of Ron to let her go.

I also liked how you revealed the circumstances behind Hermione kissing Harry. They were about to mount "the final attack", hence these two young people couldn't help kissing in front of Ron.

Now for a con crit (constructive criticism). Ron's dialogue sounded rather mature, a bit unnatural. I guess sentences sounded too formal or academic.

But many writers have difficulty writing in-character dialogues. You've shown promise in this and other fic-writing aspects.

Thanks again for the invite to read this fic. Hope to read "All Alone" soon.

My apologies for not having found the time to read this yet. I haven't been reading any fiction lately due to an extremely busy RL (vida real?).

~Pen

A nice story
But a bit confusing... until the name ron appeared I thought it was Harry

that was a good fic. i really liked it a lot! it was awsome!!!

mandi

This is a cute short fic and since it's your "first" it's really good i'm working on my first but i'm not sure if it will be good because i think my sister got all the writing genes i'm trying though i hope to finish it soon. any ways good job and keep writing.

Aphroditee

I loved it. very interesting twist. for the first few paragraphs i thought it was Harry. thenwhen he said, "I saw you whernyou went to him,when he was getting ready to leave, i realized "he" was ron. Kudos. Alorkin

I liked this story. What really attracted me was that it was based on a song in spanish. I liked the story, and I liked the twist. I really did not expect that it was Ron who was the person that was narrating...sort of. I thought it was a pretty good story... Continue writing more.

Cristina

I love your story and I love Sin Banderas.

Exelente trabajo para ser una primera vez.

¿De donde eres? Yo soy de Puerto Rico.

I liked your fanfic a lot! Beside I love "SIN BANDERA", son lo máximo!!! I have to tell you that you did a great job. Trust me, at the beginning I was thinking that Harry was the one talking, but then it was Ron. Then I understood why you chose that song, you made a great decision. By the way I hope you write more of this kind of fanfic and I hope you get inspired by another sin bandera´s songs... ej."Mientes"...it´s a suggestion..hehehe

that was really sad! But I liked how it all ended up alright, and I loved how you didn't bash Ron. At the beginning, for some reason, I thought that the HE you were refurring to was Harry! and then, when you had her say his name, I realized who it really was! Did you plan that? Wonderful fic, excellent work!

Hey, great job! i really liked your story! I thought it was Harry speaking to Hermione and then it turned out to be Ron! that was great!

"Y Lloro" is one of my favorite songs, now i'll think of this fic every time i listen to it!

OH, you made sniff! I really liked your story. Great for a first-timer.
Lierian

It's finally up!!! Well, I told you what I thought about this when you showed it to me, but I just have to say it again: I love it.

It's so simple, but you still managed to surprise me. I liked how you caught me off guard. Me, thinking it was Harry and then you just turned around and it was finally Ron. A wonderful portrayal of the Ron I like, by the way, one that loves and cares about his friends.

Now I can't help but listen to "Y lloro" and remember about this fic. Your story gave a new meaning to the song

Felicitaciones en tu primera historia en solitario y que vengan muchas más!!