ohh that cute! it has the perfect amout of drama and romance. it makes Hermione seem more like a person, not just a character.

Excellent! This short piece did something few other stories have done. You succeeded in bringing tears to my eyes.

Well Done!

Tim

Diana, this little one shot is well touching. Really in all honesty it is really a wonderful and little work. You can feel the emtions behind Harry and Hermione's voices and that's great.

Mirtilla

That was really awesome. I really liked that. Great job. The detail in it was amazing, great job.

Very nice, quite realisic, sweet but not sappy. Dedicated H/Hr shipper though I am it's sometimes nice to just see them as they are [and unfortunatly what they may always be in the book]great friends. As much as I like that, Not every story should end with snogging.

Very touching beginning. Harry was so sweet to Hermione, it made my stomach twist in a good way.

that was so sweet! I loved it! I don't havemuch to say on it, really, ecept that it was excellent and i thought you needed to know that!

good job I almost cry. well, I think if you add more 2 or 3 paragraph describing both harry and hermione emotion I will non-stop crying. anyway well done with this story.

Awesome! You know, and I imagine you've been told this a number of times before, you have an incredible 'way' with words. Incredible use of diction with vivid description that conveys powerful emotion! I could almost smell the air at the Burrow! Oh, and fabulous ending! Keep up the incredible work!

kayce

Very nice indeed. I like Hermione's 'voice' here - you had me believing every word. It works very well as a one-shot, as well. This was just long enough to capture the moment for us.

Cheers
Jen

That was pretty good! you really are very talented! Keep going on this story?

This is very sweet, I like it very much. Congrats on the great job!

What? This is complete? Please don't stop here! I love this! It is sooo cute and superb writing. But if you must stop now, it was excellent and had a good ending. Thank you for writing something so elegant.

OH you have to continue this one. There is too much that was left out. They need to talk about this further. come on, don't leave us hanging.....

how agnsty, and just right, please do post more like this, perhaps carry this one on?