Hummmmm cool that everything went right... humm... Like Luna said once... Ron is very funny... but sometimes he is very rought! luckly he wasn't a perfect prat this time!

huhuhuhu I... really, there's not much to say... I liked it! It was sweet, and there was lots of love hauahuahu, I think that fits well to them...

hummmm that kind of thought... she beeing perfect for him makes sece u know! I think that's why I'm H/Hr!

You did a great job. It was a mature story, unlike some of your fellow writers do. Keep up the great work,Pepperoni

Great chapter. It was a 'different' ending then I ussually read, but I liked it nonetheless. Keep up the great work. Pepperoni

Lovely story, well written, funny, sweet and romantic (and let's not forget the smut!) all in one.

Enjoyed reading it muchly, I'll definitely be checking out your other fics Great job!

Again, very cute...and HAWT! XD *fans self*

I liked the little revelation point, been waiting for that for ages, and you didn't disappoint Although, Ron and Hermione were together for over two years and never had sex? Seems slightly hard to believe, but it's sweet that harry and Hermione had each other, anyway. Good job.

Wow, Harry has a lot more balls than I would in that situation. I'd be like..."Madonna *zooms off*"

*headdesk*

Nice chapter, enjoyed it thoroughly

When are they going to wake up indeed. Again, a very sweet chapter XD I do like my fluff, and this delievered nicely.

Can't wait to see what happens next.

I thought it was very sweet, the way Harry saved Hermione in the same way his mother saved him

Enjoyable chapter, I loved the wrong-footing of the Harry/Ron/Hermione love triangle as well. Can't wait to read more

I think that would have been more interesting if she had found out it was his letter while she was dating Ron. The way it is now, it didn't really have that all big of an impact on the story...

Excellent writing I look forward to finishing this story. ~Bob_015

Okay, so I like your story, it's actually quite good, but there are some things that I wanted to point out, constructive criticism, if you will.

I like where this story is going, but there are a couple of things I noticed. First of all, you repeat words way too many times and it can get a bit tedious at times, for example:

"Hermione held out her wine glass as Harry poured some wine in her glass, she she held up her glass for a toast. Their glasses came together as the wine sloshed in the glasses..." of course that's not a direct quote from your story just an example. You could replace the word 'glass' with other ones like "Hermione held out her wine glass as Harry filled it with the deep red liquid, she held it up for a toast. The glasses game together as the wine sloshed around in them..." or something like that. Anyway, like I said before this is a good story, you just gotta work on some stuff, I have read your other ones and I must say I liked them alot. Good luck with everything!

Oooh this is great, I love it and I really can't wait to read the rest of it. wonderful job so far.

StarCandy

I shivered, I cried, and 'squeed'. This was adorable! I loved it!

...I just want to know who they're talking to. And who on earth would describe their first night of sex with someone? >>;

And btw, I congratulate you on finding a boyfriend who will read and edit your work. Mine doesn't even read. Haha.

Bravo, love, this was lovely. (: