Really nice fiction...  I have never heard of the song or listened to it before so I skipped that part...  Hope you don't mind... But the story overall was really good... But a bit too short...  |
Author Feedback: Oh you mean the one with SINGING IN THE RAIN? That's one of the most famous musicals ever made in Hollywood. I think it's from about 1954. It starred Gene Kelly (who sang the song) and Debbie Reynolds. It's a fun movie about making movies in the early days of "talking pictures"; you should rent it. And the story was short because, for the fic challenge, we couldn't write more than 1,000 words. The good news is, I don't belong to that fic challenge group anymore, so I'll be writing stories as long as they seem to need to be from now on  Thanks for commenting. |
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so cute, and with back story. Awesome.
I think I saw a picture depicting this scene, or one like it, somewhere...but I can't remember where for the life of me at the moment |
Author Feedback: Hi, do you mean the beach story? I had a drawing by Muddgutts in mind when I wrote this story  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/12/04
Very nice, fic. its swweet! i hope u write more fics soon.
Indigo Veritas |
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Cute, sweet and to the point, love it, love it, love it. Your a great writer!!! |
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I just love first kisses between Harry and Hermione! You wrote that with such tenderness and joy! Lovely. Just the pick-me-up I needed on this rainy Eeyore day. |
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ashleemacSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 29/07/04
this was a great challenge fic. it really touched my heart. every time i read a first kiss of harry and Hermione i just get really teary-eyed... now i feel dumb.... oh well..... |
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Ahhh ... a favorite musical (which, as always, gives an indication of how long I've been walking God's good earth , although I remember this scene from Gene Kelly specials  ).
Beautiful story, Anne.
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Dude! I saw this particular challenge, and though I never take them up due to extreme laziness and lack of will, this is precisely the song I would have chosen. I even briefly thought of it, fueled by a Spidey-2 high...
I may even do something like it in the future, so thanks for setting extremely high standards for me, should I choose to do so!
This was truly genius, haha...
Ahh, tiramisu...The Italian in me is groaning in pleasure. |
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You conveyed Hermione's constancy to Harry and her willingness to give him room emotionally brilliantly. Very lovely peaceful scene on the beach--hooray for peace for Harry! I loved these lines: "No stars exploded behind his eyes; no rockets rang out in the night sky. But the softness of her lips wrapped his heart in a blanket of peace and calm." I hope canon Harry will find such peace soon! |
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MuirninSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/07/04
You have this as a challenge response, but you do not say which challenge it was for... And while it was well written, it really did not meet the word count for the challenges either for SWSC... You have a lot of potential, but you do not expand on your God Given talent...
Work on expanding your work... you may find that it will increase your readership as well as your reviews.
I know it is not always easy to hear a critique of any kind... (I suffer from being VERY sensitive in that regards) but you do have a great deal of potential to be a great writer if only you would trust yourself, your muse and your imgination...
Can't wait to see what you have FOR the next challenge. |
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