Teehee! Oh Draco`s such a naughty boy! Fab! Loved the bit in Dumbledore`s office! I wouldn`t be surprised if he asked McGonagall to enlighten him on the joys of twister once the students had left! lol

Mwahahahaha! Someones gonna be in trouble! I think detention is in order!

Loved the part about Draco`s arse! He is such a terrible flirt!

Wow! Remind me to have a twister mat to hand if I ever see Tom Felton!!! Would like to hear about after the game though! Another really good short ficlet!

Wow! Remind me to have a twister mat to hand if I ever see Tom Felton!!! Would like to hear about after the game though! Another really good short ficlet!

i really hope you write more. ginny seems a bit out of character but in a good way. i think this is a good start to a story. hope you continue it.

I love how Draco insists that Ginny MUST have enjoyed the kiss just because he did. Hilarious story. Just the image of a load of wobbling, drunk students in Dumbledore's office was enough.

Heheh cute story.

Twister really is such a fun game. Anyway yes I liked this story a lot. It's nice just to read some humour D/G fics sometimes.

That was good. I liked it. Not nearly enough smut, but good nonetheless. Just a couple of little spelling errors ... and the only reason I mention them is because they drive me nuts in my own fanfics...

“Get over it, Malfoy. I win, you loose.”
--Loose is used as in to loosen a rope. The opposite of win is lose.

“Whatever you say, Weasley,” he drawled, face lite up, even as he turned to leave.
--Lite isn't technically a word, but slang ... I'm fairly certain. Someone's face can light up, but only food can be lite.

Please take this for the complete constructive criticism that it is.

This is just one of my fave stories. I always try to read it although I've read it before... It's so Funny!

This was a funny and original fic. I enjoyed it very much.

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Draco can't hold his liquor? That's some premise you're trying to make us believe. Ginny is still somewhat out of character.

Getting better, but Ginny sure is a harpy in this one.

Good premise, lots of fluff - I like it a lot.