that part where she said she's loved him since the troll.. well it reminded me of The Sound of Music.. well.. if you've seen it.. the part where they confess being in love with eachother since ... if you have no idea what i'm talking about sorry.. great story by the way.. and your essay's (the one or so i read.. i read way too many today..) great story!

That was great please keep up the great work.Thank you for the time and effort you have put in to this story.Ignore any and all flames.

Did I actually beta this and forget about it? *wonders at self* I enjoyed reading (re-reading?) it, though. I always enjoy your writing, as you well know.

Oh wait, did you post this in the FAP Cookie Jar? If so, I am starting to remember it. *feels like a dork* Oh well, still enjoyed the re-read.

the front part is really good, brought tears to my eyes, I felt really heart broken. But then, u started these lengthy (somewhat corny) explanation or confession, which made the mood dissapear. But the front is very good.

That's a really sweet story

I think it describes Harry and Hermiones relationship well

Goldgrin

like ur story! kinda funny in a way...keep up the good work!!

I feel ... torn.

On the one hand --

On the other --

But most definitely ...

The funny thing is, I found myself alternately wanting to *brain* Harry as he was going through his emotional turmoil:

"Harry looked at her and realized that there were so many things he didn’t know about her. He had never considered that she had harbored such a secret from him and Ron. He also felt jealous that she had given her heart to someone else. He couldn’t believe that she felt a greater loyalty to this secret love than to her two best friends, so much so that she would keep that knowledge from himself and Ron. Harry began to feel very resentful to some unknown phantom. His mind went through the roster of guys in his school, but couldn’t think of anyone deserving of Hermione. His hands began to clench in anger."

Although in truth ... I wanted to start hitting a brick wall myself.

Been there, done that -- and have the scars to prove it.

Which is why I find this so touchingly beautiful, so wonderfully emotive ... and rings so true to my still-ringing brain.



Beautiful work, dear.

gil

Very cute. It has a reminiscent appeal to it as the chapter from the books its name is derived from. I enjoyed it. It was very vute and romantic, in a more broom closet sort of way. I hope that people who read this see that the true couple is just as you specified with your good writing, and not Ron and Hermione. Anyway, I really did enjoy this one-shot and I hope you write more stories in the future.
Angie.

That was adorable. And do you know, I've never thought of that connection - of Hermione almost being killed by a troll and Ron turning around and practically labelling her one in GOF. Hmm.. another strike against R/Hr, methinks.

That was very nice. Keep up the good work.

What about the Room of Requirement?? That would be a great secret meeting place for any future stories. It was good.

true, i guess that could happen, although i still think that ron and hermione will get together although i want it to be h/hr. i guess that's what this site is for!
nice job
katelyn

Darling little piece there. Sweet as candy sprinkled with sugar. Thanks for sharing - and write more! We all need this fluff to get us through the interminal days before canon backs us up!

Awww... that was cute and something that I could see happening. Harry does tend to put others before himself, so I can see it. Great job.

Not that angsty, but pretty good. Tried and true method of getting around ron, still warms me heart, lol...

I agree with you just because Harry has never shown any attraction towards Hermione means nothing. I was once told, true love is not in what we say but shown in how we act towards that person and that is true of Harry and Hermione all you have to do is read the books and you will find that to be true! Also me and this fella at school always fought and I really couldn`t stand him and everyone used to say that it was because we were secretly in love with each other...well he turned out to be gay so Hermione and Ron fighting with each other means nothing Not that I am saying Ron is gay but I think I prove my point!!

Love the story and I think you proved your point as well