Wow ! That's good for a first H/Hr NC 17 fic.
and yeah you've greatly improved over time.
Keep writing !

I love the little comment harry made. I guess you were trying to make the expression i fell head over heels for you line into a story. But i need to know how old were they when they first kissed. I mean i hoped it was like 6th or 7th year and not like the 3rd or 4th. Idk i guess i'm just wondering. Great Job. Keep Writing.

I loved that! That was so sweet! I could only wish that it was more detailed... but I have absolutely no complaints about it! Brilliant! Short, but sweet! You're a wonderful writer! I look forward to reading more of your stories when I find the time!
-Michelle

I though it was head over heels? Or Maybe I'm missing the point.... lol I usually do. Anyways I loved the story and I can't wait to read more!

*%* Susanna *%*

this was so cute. I'm glad that Harry remember what the anniversary was. Hermonie was so bold just kissing him like that, but one of them had to do it.

kjm

it was short the plot was good but u shouldve stretched it no spellin errors at least

I like this fic
It is very good
I hope you write more

Beppo gunnar
Bonn, Germany

That was sweet, I wished you kinda made it longer, but oh well I enjoyed reading the story a lot!

Short and sweet little ficlet. I liked it. Keep up the good work.

Talking about a quickie...that was really quick but hot all the same.

That was short, but sweet. They've been together 10 yrs, are they married (not that its all that important)?

That was wonderful. Short, but still lovely. Ahh, memories... Good job with that, I liked it!

-Myst

I loved it! Your first H/Hr NC-17 fic, huh? Impressive. I don't think it's quite NC-17, though. More like R, maybe. You weren't pushing the envelope THAT much...