I am sorry for not entering any reviews until the end but I found the story so ingrossing that I did not want to waste time doing that when I could be reading the story. I only have so much free time while at work, which is where I usually have the opportunity to read. Knowing this was a completed work I knew you did not need chapter reviews. Having read book 6, I keep wondering what kind of changes you would have made to the story. I have enjoyed the entire story from begining to end. There were times I would have liked to have seen you expand on different things especially on the emotions, which your story was full of. I love to see a womans expressions of such things as we men, usually fall very fall short on this aspect of story telling, which is why I would much rather to read a females perspective because I would not have a way of feeling or expressing such things. Thank you for this entertaining story and I will look forward to reading some of your other works.

your story was amazing! I couldn't stop reading until the end I like how the characters are portrayed & I like how Ron is not an ass like in many H/Hr stories

“If Sirius thinks this is the best idea, I trust his judgment,” she said. “I trust you, Harry. I trust you with my life.”

“I won’t let you down, Hermione,” Harry said. “I promise.”

Well, were is my prince or my bodyguard?I've been searching for while and haven'T found the perfct one anyway,that so good.

Are you sure?” he said. “This could change everything, you know?”

“Promise?” she asked, smiling.
What do you do after somebody tells you something like that? I think you just faint. So sweeeeeeeet.

“Hermione?” he asked.

“Hmmm?” she said, breaking away from her thoughts.

“I thought you were going to sleep,” he said.

“I was,” she said. “I mean, I am.”

“Good night, then,” he said, lying down on the sofa.

“Good night,” she said.

soooooooo sweeeeet,
How will Ron react when he will see Harry? That's the question of the time.Da dad dad daddddddd

Ohoh, does Hermione's mother suspect that she actually prefer Harry to Ron, or was is just a sentence like that? Anyway,I love how it goes so keep going.

Hmmmmmmmmm, interesting, so now what's going to happen? I like the way you described Harry, always questionniéngé himself.It was really interesting.
Bravo!

your story is nice... i like it...

keep up the good work!!!

sorry for the late review....

Well done love. This a brilliant story. You seem to have a thing with Hermione being kidnapped and hidden away by crazy, mutinous men. I noticed that after I read The sequel to Dirty Dancing. But great job. I loved the ending. I'm assuming that you didn't know that Hermione's middle name is actually Jane, yet? It makes for a fine middle name nontheless. Again, well done.
-Skylar

Hi!!

I really liked this story!!

At first, I thought you got this idea from 'The Notebook', seeing as the love when they were younger, then one of them left, haven't seen each other in years, have a sum what "affair" while one is engaged, then they marry and have kids. But, than I saw that you wrote this in 2003 and was like, never mind, lol.

I'm a very faithful reader of yours and Heaven's 'Dirty Dancing' series and I thought that since your stories with her were so good, i decided to read some from you yourself. And I love them!! I think you are a terrific author and I can't wait to read more from you!!

Have a great day!!

,
Caity

PS: I can't wait for the update on Saturday for 'Last Dance'!!

Love the story, really do, but... I really think that you should think about how often you repeat things in your story...
I noticed a couple of saytings that came up at least 2 times and it would make the story a little better if you weren't disstracted by that...

Well just wanted to let you know about that thing, and keep up the goos writing, hope to read some new from you soon.

i read this story and i just have to say that i don't find it very believable. i know this is just a fanfic and ur allowed to play with the carecters but i think that this was past the point of believablity. i don't think that hermione would marry ron or date him for that matter if she had ANY feeling at all left for harry. i also don't think that hermione would do anything with harry before making a clean break with ron. other than these little parts i think that the story line was very good and it was overall very well written.

i loved it....very very good!!!i dont see how its rated r. it doesnt seem to be that bad.....

Ooh, tormented Harry always ... ALWAYS ... leads to a good romance. I also love that my D/G itch has been scratched! I do hope Ron isn't crushed in the end though. I don't particularly care for R/H stories, but I still don't like seeing his heart ripped out in the end!

Good beginning. I'm off to read the rest! I can't wait!