I really cannot wait for the next installment of this story. I hope I am wrong in thinking I know what is going to happen next because I think it would be best if it were a surprise. Good luck with the story and I will resond as soon as I read them.

God bless,
S'Eleene Paris

It'S sO gOoOd! Wirte MoOre! PLZ! I lUb HOGWARTS! eMaIl me!

hehe... hermione.luna... i was right!!

(sorry, i couldn't resist, you probably didn't want to hear that about your story.)

i went back and read the rest of your reviews... they were really nice!! can't believe you were so modest about your story!

el pollo! hah... pollo!

(lo siento que yo no escriba un commento más intelligente... mis células del cerebro están mush después de leer het!)

(but what the hell... it's het, and i'm reading it... *shakes head at self*... just remember... i'm doing this for you! swallowing my gag reflexes and doing this for you!! gah!)

Very nice, you've captured the personalities of the characters well.

I think you should continue and not do a cliff hanger unless you're wri ting a sequel which I don't think yuo want ot but if you do be my guest

I notice that you haven't updated in a long while. Since you have got the characters personalities spot on, I hope you do continue this one! Your scenario seems very realistic.

Interesting first two chapters. I'm curious to see where you go with this, so update soon!

i think you should continue its a good vvery good i have never read sopmething this close to canon but that is a good thing!

i think you should continue its a good vvery good i have never read sopmething this close to canon but that is a good thing!

So far - EXCELLENT! Please keep going. If you don't like to tread on the as yet unknown territory of book 6, perhaps you could just keep the story within the first 6-8 weeks of school-don't get to Halloween! And keep exploring Harry's journey of emotions in relation to Sirius, the prophesy and of course, Hermione! Whatever you decide to do is fine with me as long you keep going! Pretty please!! "HJP"

Very good . Had me on the edge of my seat. You have captured the characters in a way I have never seen before. Bravo. Keep it up.

Interesting first two chapters. I could see Harry acting like this. Good job, and I look forward to reading more

I think you should continue...I like it a lot. I hope you continue and I hope there will be more chapters to read soon.