 awww. that is so cute. i'm all mushy and happy and awww. i loved it. |
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MuseUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/03/07
Somehow I managed to find this story and I'm glad I did. I don't know how this escaped me before, but I just have to say this story was eloquently written. Absolutely beautiful. |
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I stumbled onto this story and found it absolutely adorable, especially with how nervous they are around each other. It was nice to read both of their perspectives and amusing how Harry contacted Ginny for advice.
The very end was the sweetest, with coming back for one more kiss. |
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This is a very very cute story, the description of both of them are so full and detailed that I have a feeling that u either read a lot of romance novels or this came from ur own experience. As cute as it is, I really don't think that their first date would be like this. I don't think they would have all the embarrassment of kissing each other. They would be holding themselves back for sooooo long that they'd probably kiss at that very moment. Apart from that, this is still a very cute story that i enjoyed reading. I liked the ending too~ |
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JanieBSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/09/04
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Aww, damn what a story. Great job on describing points of perspective. This was a really great fic. Can't wait to read more from you. |
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Oh that was wonderful!! I loved it!! yaya! I am so gald that I desiced to take a look and see what eles you had written. Kudos to you!! |
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this was a great story. i liked it so much! it was really good. i liked having harys POV too. it helped
-mandi |
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wow! very beautiful,sweet fic. I love this,really good job. oh! I can't find your e-mail add
Do you mind if I translate this fic into my language? if you OK pls. reply me at erroom_potter@yahoo.com
Thanks |
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Really good story. I liked how you showed both of Harry and Hermione's point of views and I also liked how they were consistent. Really well written! Great job! |
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That was a very sweet story... I do love a good fluffy fic!  |
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Fluffy8uSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/07/04
Wow. I love the back and forth between the past and present, and Harry and Hermione. The detailing is brilliant, and the absence of plot is wonderful. Great job! |
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Oh what a sweet story!! I really liked it, it was nice and everything, I liked the way you narrated things, and it was funny to read how the both of them had the very same thoughts at the very same moment...  good job |
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That was awesome. Took me way back to my first kiss. Brilliant, just brillinat. |
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paisleypiUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/07/04
The was fanatatic! Just what I was hoping it would be. A very sweet story. |
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