Wow, it's really different, but deffinitley in a good way! I look foward to future updates!

Aww that sucks for Lily, her doll got crashed but still. I hope next chapter she goes to Hogwarts or something and maybe it will be longer.

kool. it sounds good so far. please continue, and finish, because u didnt finish lily of the valley and i wanted to know how that ended so i think u owe me this. thanx. bye
~prongsgurl
ps keep up the good work

oh this looks interesting!! Keep going!1 iwant to see another chapter really soon!!!

Oh, no! Lily's only company is her dolls, and one of them broke... But is the meeting about Hogwarts? And James is two years older than Lily?

Oh, no! Lily's only company is her dolls, and one of them broke... But is the meeting about Hogwarts? And James is two years older than Lily?

Ooooooooo...I already love this story. It sounds so tragic, and only in the first few sentences. I don't believe in reincarnation, but the description works very well in the story. Could you please make the chapters longer and the updates as frequent as possible? Thanks a lot!

write more. This is great. i love it. it makes me sad. poor Mrs. Evans. Poor james. what a freak mother.

Omg you are such an awesome writer, I cant wait till your next chapter. Please hurry and update!

Was that the end?

I hope not, I'd like to see more of this - it's wonderful!

I love your writing technique. It so imagery-intensive. I feel like I'm there, just a fly on the fall, watching everything that goes on.
Great update... can't wait to read more!

good good good good good good good good good good good good good

This is very intriguing...I'd like to see where you take this. It seems very interesting, and your writing style is very thought provoking. Excellent first chapter!

An interesting start... I am definitely intrigued. I can't wait to see where exactly you're going to take this story. The beginning was very descriptive; I enjoy descriptive-ness.

Oh, looks VERY interesting! Your writing reminds me of Kate Atkinson. She's my favourite writer for the record, so that's a compliment! Keep up the good work!