LOL.
well, she sure as hell can't hide, huh? this chapter was very cute written, and i loved it. just though i would let you know

Ummm... well...
i have only one little thing to say;
this is going to be akward

"...he would have realized that Dobby scooted right by Nicole…and gave his parchment to Hermione."
I loved it! so far...

I didn't like the ending. It was agood story, though. Hermione and Harry are the only way to go!!!!

very good! i like it alot! its really cute, keep writing!

its fantastico, really really cute and i like the twist. i like all your other stories too but this one is especially cute! keep writing!

Do you know what? If I were YOUR Hermione, I wouldn't make up with YOUR Harry so easily, but would pretended how I was upset with HIM. After making HER misunderstand like that, HE must have begged and begged, trying everything to show HER that SHE is the only ONE he loved. That should have served HIM right.
^_^

That was a really sweet ending. Harry asking that so soon after they confess their feelings can be truely bad in a fic if it's not done right. And you did a wonderful job with it! Great fic!

Hehe...the chase is on... I wonder where they'll end up... There's some very amusing places they could make up at. ^_^

LMAO! That was great! Maybe I'm odd, but I can only see Hermione reacting like that when it's Harry. Any other quy would get slapped and hexed for kissing her. ^_^

LOL. This is good. Though I can't see Harry in a relationship such as the one he has with Nicole in this.

Great Story. Its one of my absolute favorites. Way to go

Keep writing, keep writing. I like it. "She cried like a baby". Excellent build up.

omg how can Harry be so stupid as to not tell Dobby who his girlfriend is?

Harry's appreciation for her seems like it goes beyond sex and looks. I don't know if it's his appreciation for her, or the way you write her... but she seems to absolutely *glow* i know people like that...people who just...glow. Their very presence makes them gorgeous. Fabulous writing, i thought you should know. My opinion on a good author comes not from technique or perfect grammar, but from the impressions the words leave in your mind. You have a fabulous knack for that. keep up the good work.