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Corrupting The Innocents

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Fiona
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 10/07/04
This was a great chapter. I, in general, dislike Ginny Weasley quite a bit but your portrayal of her here almost made me like her.

I love reading about H/Hr from other people's POV. It just reinforces it to me how beautiful the relationship between them is - but they just dont' see it! I'm so eager for JKR to write them coming upon that lightbulb moment.

Until then, there's awesomeness like what you've shared with us. Keep up the fabulous work!
 

thephotoman
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 10/07/04
Oh my! I hadn't expected this! Wonderful work thus far, Gil!

And the return of the cameos in the first part was quite amusing. Got a few chuckles from me.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 10/07/04
Oh my! I hadn't expected this! Wonderful work thus far, Gil!

And the return of the cameos in the first part was quite amusing. Got a few chuckles from me.
 

Anasazi
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 10/07/04
Wow. Quite a lot of angst in this chapter. I specially liked when she says that she would be happy to have what Cindy has... is it that impossible? And what will Ron have to say about this? Good job, Romulus!
Author Feedback: May I respectfully inquire why you are reading this, rather than writing "The Accursed"?

Joking, of course.

I feel humbled that you have found the time to read and post reviews for this story, taking time from your own writing to come up with such heart-warming comments about my story.

More than humbled, I feel truly truly honored.

Thank you!

gil

 

Kaze
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 08/07/04
*blinks*

That was angst.

*victory dance* I knew I could pull you over to the *light* side.



Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Cindy's musing are postively heartwrenching. You can relate to the girl. Everybody remembers their first crush that could not be.

I could go on singing your praises, but you know how I feel already.
Author Feedback: "That was angst."

(Horrified) What's happening to me? Woe, woe is me! I've been corrupted!



Thank you. Praise from you fills my heart, makes me and feel all giddy and fluffy inside.



But still ... I feel humbled by your approval of this.

Thank you.

gil
 

Gillian Halliwell
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 08/07/04
You know....
I could write you a long, beautiful review, telling all about how really special that's made me feel, how beautifuly I feel you can get inside my own head.... what a lovely surprise this was with the day I've had....
But I won't.
That's a secret that's meant to be just between you and me.... brother and sister, honouring the brotherly love for the sake of love itself...
Bloddy Gillian, some rambling she just got out there...
love you, will e-mail you soonest!
 

kw702955
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 08/07/04
awsome awssome awsome love it so awsome i can not wait for more
 

danielerin
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 08/07/04
Wow, I didn't know she had a crush on him. (Was I not paying attention before?) How very poignant. Your words say much without any dialogue between the characters. Impressive.
 

Sarmi
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 08/07/04
This is a good story, I wander what you plan to do next. Keep up the good work.
 

Bloody Sakura
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 08/07/04
I've just read the two chapters, one after the other. You see, I was tempted to review in the first one, because I thought it couldn't get better... I was so wrong.

Once again, you're surprising me. Who would have thought Cindy felt this way, huh? It's amazing how can you describe it without making it sound terrible. It was... kind of sweet really, especially when she touched the badge.

About the title, "Corrupting the Innocents", I have a faint clue now of what Erin meant by that. Just hope I'm right in the end...

I loved "Dream Chasing" (as I loved every other story of yours) and I think this is, so far, wothy of being its sequel. Can't wait for the next, keep it up. ^_^
 

MissLexiRe
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 08/07/04
Awwww... poor kid. So young, but such a big crush. Those are sometimes the hardest to get over. Good chapter.
 

Anasazi
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 08/07/04
Ouch. Now I understand why the angst... although it is tragically beautiful that shes's able to witness that little exchange. Good job, Romulus. You've got me hooked.
 

Anasazi
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 08/07/04
Ouch. Now I understand why the angst... although it is tragically beautiful that shes's able to witness that little exchange. Good job, Romulus. You've got me hooked.
 

Kaze
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/07/04
I couldn't stop laughing when I saw the title.

And then you made me swoon and giggle like a school girl.

You are *so* lucky I adore you.

A wonderful read as always, gil. The whole observation of Harry watching Hermione made me melt.

I'm so excited that you decided to make a sequel to 'Dream Chasing', a bit suspicious though. *evil eye* Apparently I'm going to have to make a huge effort in combating the dark side. Almost had me too, , my fangirl fantasies of Blaise will inevitably be my downfall... but I won't give in.

Maybe in the future.

In the *far* away future...

 

SweetSolitude137
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/07/04
You have no idea how excited I am about this sequal! I absolutely loved Dream Chasing, and I can already tell that I'm going to love this one as well.

Great introduction to the fic; I thought it was very clever of you to show a bit of H/Hr through the eyes of a new American student.

I'm really looking forward to your update! I hope to see the next chapter soon!

(Oh, and about your little accident on the computer- I feel your pain. That has happened to me so many times after I finish typing up a fic of mine. And even though you probably already know this, try to save each chapter on a floppy disk- I learned that the hard way... stupid me!)
 

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