I really love this story. It's well made. The was it is put out works real well. The plot is just perfect.

it rocks wonderful story only if it was real it rocks i just wonder if they will get married

For heavens sake, How old are you. Your writing reads like one of my former students. they were 4th and 5th grade profieient in High School. Your syntax is off, your time sequencing is off and your sentences are so simplistic as to be of a juvenile effort. As a former teacher I pray that you get yourself some adequate betas to read and correct your work. If your storyline were not so very cute I would certainly wonder if you were retarede!! This work is an insult to anyone conversant with English literature.

I write this review with much sorrow. I am a retired Secondary Teacher who had taught composition for many years and I must say that you beta reader missed many mistakes that have been made in this story and this chapter in particular. While I do feel that there is much humor to be had in this story I feel that you should select a second beta reader to correct the errors that still exist in this story.

i liked it! where is harry? will they find him? update soon!

I love this story since the 1st time I read it a year ago. Can you please write more I want to know about Duncan, Hermione and Harry. Please up date. I bet everyone of your reading has been waiting for you to write since11/02/06.
Thankyou

Enjoyable story. Please write more chapters ASAP.

Need to find out what happens

Uhmm..this story is interesting. I just started reading it and I was wondering if you're going to finish it...hope you are.

*poke poke* update? maybe? pleeeeeeeease? I'm loving this story. Duncan calling Hermione mama makes me wanna hug things.

snape is a piece of work isn't he? *kicks* the jerk. good thing dumbledore set him straight though.

this is a very good story i liked it very much i am waiting for the next chapter

this story actualy made me cry! i was like sad!!!! what happens next? i just gotta know or life will never be the same!!!

Pleaz write more i'v bin reading this since you started and now been waiting since for you to write more

are you going to continue i hope you are but if you aren't plz answer me this is duncan harry's and hermione's son if so how do they not know plz answer me at me email fernandamartinsmoreira@hotmail.com

are you going to continue i hope you are but if you aren't plz answer me this is duncan harry's and hermione's son if so how do they not know plz answer me at me email fernandamartinsmoreira@hotmail.com