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The Dangers of Naiveté

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Lexy
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/12/05
*gasp!* What is going to happen next?! I need to know!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/06/05
This is a very good story. I really want you to get the next chapter up As Soon As Possible!!!
 

_DaNnY_
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/04
Come on, girl!! up date, soon, please, please, please!! i really wanna read more!!
 

Lara
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/07/04
Wow. This is really, really, really good. I don't even know what else to say except that I hope you update soon.
 

Katakali
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/07/04
OH MY GOD!!!
This is certainly some brilliant beginning!
Loved it all the way and back!
I just love this kind of stories and I think there aren´t enough good ones out there. Good ones and excellent ones as yours.
Believe me, reading this has been one of the most wonderful surprises that I´ve come to found in portkey!
Needless to say: UPDATE!!!!
 

MissLexiRe
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/07/04
Wow. What a beginning. This seems like it will be quite the fic. Can't wait for the next chapter.
 

Nice
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/07/04
Great start-not great in the sense of what's happening in the story. It's just a moving story and I can tell that great things will result from this story. -Nice-
 

typical-me
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/07/04
so called intresting begining. eventful . soo much to swallow at once. ron and hermione married,dark forces , back 2 years...woa the major story. keep up the good work.
 

_DaNnY_
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/07/04
really, really great. I ust say that ... poor Ron... anyway, it's really good and i wanna read the next chapter... go on!
 

danielerin
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/07/04
Very interesting opening chapter. I have a hard time reading any R/Hr at all (given that I think it's impossible for that to be a happy relationship, in canon), but I put that aside because I think your writing is very good and always entertaining. I'm looking forward to seeing what goes on in this HP world. It sounds exciting and angsty and it seems like you have quite a tale to spin in order to get to a fulfilling H/Hr. I'm in. Looking forward to Chapter 2.
 

Twisted Anjel
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/07/04
Ooh, how sad. So much angst in one chapter ... Great JOb. Please update soon because I'm completely hooked. Can't wait to read more!

Anjel
 

Twisted Anjel
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/07/04
Ooh, how sad. So much angst in one chapter ... Great JOb. Please update soon because I'm completely hooked. Can't wait to read more!

Anjel
 

KypDurron
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/07/04
Whoa! Bad Ferret! Trying to kill Hermione.

Awww, selfless act, Weasley.

Uh oh, the darkness has taken over.
 

IamHermione
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/07/04
Bloody Brilliant! Please, Please, update soon! I really can't wait! If you've read tears of the phoenix, you'll know that, when I say this looks like it might be as good, if not better, is a very good sign! Update soon!
IamHermione
 

simons_flower
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/07/04
Oooh, what a deliciously angsty start. Leaves so many questions that I can only hope you answer soon... though this premise leaves you the chance to draw it out.

While I'm sad you had to kill Ron (no, I'm not angry, I've done it, too), I like the idea of Harry and Hermione being the underdogs fighting against the dark tide that has overtaken the wizarding world. The rebels, as they've always been.

Can't wait for chapter 2.
 

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