KelliUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/12/04
Oh wow! I loved this fic and your writing style! Very descriptive! |
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Heee! *pokes Nitya* Me definitely likey. I loooove your insight on Harry- and I love the end of it. |
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*sees name in AN and gets an ego boost*  Honestly Nitya, this is just fantastic, and you know it. You may be very humble about your fics, but honestly, you are a genius when it comes to the written word. I truly enjoyed beta-ing this for you and reading it again just sends WAFFy feelings throughout me. Congrats on another awesome fic. |
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that was so beautiful. really sweet. honestly i could never, ever write anything as beautiful as this. it's so pensive and thoughtful, it truly sounds like it's coming from the heart. it shows the innocence of harry and hermione's first relationship as friends and how it developed into love, but as a pure kind of love, not lust. i think you really brought that out really well, in this beautiful piece, so congrats to you! |
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Awwww!  Cute story! I love it!  I'm kind of embarrassed to ask, but, exactly what question did he ask her?  I'm sorry! Sometimes I'm so dense with this stuff! Please don't throw tomatoes at me!  lol Anyway, lovely story! I love your writing styles and I love all of your stories!  Your story is definitley sequel material in my book! (hint,hint!) Love it! Go you!
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Author Feedback: He asked her to marry him. And it's okay; I'm dense too!  Thanks!
Unfortunately it won't have a sequel; it's fine as a stand alone. But eh, I'll consider it.  |
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davacaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/07/04
not bad. Not bad at all. The POV is a bit confussing, but at least you explained who 'you' was, unlike some autors do. |
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usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/07/04
That was very very good. I didn't think it was really corny that you put "you" instead of Hermione. IT's much better than seeing her name over and over again. |
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