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God I love how Hermione was a bit sneaky and stuff and that last line "I lied" I was like you go Hermione man good stuff good stuff |
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Dark_SpyroUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/01/06
Wow. *That* rocked! Omg, luuuuv it.
Awesome, Ab Fab, incredible, amazing... I dont know enough word, I can't think of anything else at the moment. Wow - you have just became my favourite Author, well done.
 Spyro |
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hp43v3rSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/12/05
Wow. I think I've read all of your stories now. This was an awesome one-shot. Wasn't rushed at all. Great writing.
-hp43v3r |
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skyaceSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/12/05
OH! THat DEVious little Hermione! And she gets a perfect first kiss! :envy: |
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WOW. Not only was this extremely hot, it was well written! *fans self* |
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Oh god! that's so good!! she lied! haha wonderful! I love as you get that the kisses was so passionate. Congrats!! |
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I loved this. The pacing was perfect. The idea behind the event was believable and natural. Post-OotP it could have happened this way.
And are we really paying that much attention to HBP at this moment? I think not. |
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WOOT!!! Loved this fanfic! It's sooo awesome! I really liked this part: " She let out a flighty laugh. “Well, you better learn it before your date with her tomorrow, Harry, or…”
He grabbed her suddenly and yanked her hard against him. “The date’s canceled.”
With wide eyes, Hermione stared up at him. “Canceled? Since when?”
“Since just now,” he said and then crushed his lips against hers." GO HARRY! I also liked the ending. Hermione is very clever indeed! Thanks for sharing! |
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Wow, That's so Freaking Amazing! I Loved how Harry Forgot Jessica's name and The Last Line how Hermione Lied about her first kiss.  |
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HHr4evrSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/10/05
That was so sweet...like a fluff attack. And I loved it how she lied...this story is so greatly written.
I've read a lot of your stories...in fact one of them is in my own little top ten list.
~Lauren~ |
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OK... I LOVE it! it is really cute and... oh, i nerly couldn't breathe when i read it! keep up the good work, mate |
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AWESOME! That was totally sweet and with the bestest twist ending! lol anyways i loved it and your writing style as i've said before is perfectly done, not too fast and not too slow. all in all a good read! |
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Terrific! I love how the words flow, and it's just absolutely amazing! I thought it was very clever of Hermione to "lie" about her first kiss with Viktor... Anyway, good job! |
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^^ Awww. Both cute and romantic. Actually, I laughed at the end too because I thought Harry was going to be the sneaky one and say he brought up another girl just to see Hermione's reaction...so I liked the reversal there where it's Hermione who lied. Very nice. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/04/05
awww this is sooo like romantic!! i love it! u are an awesome writer!! YEA! go H/HR! hehe |
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