MAN...THAT WAS ONE OF THE MOST SWEETEST STORIES EVER!!!
I WISH ROWLING HAD SOMETHN LIKE THIS IN THE REAL BOOKS!!!

BUT I M SINCERELY YOUR FAN NOW!!
U DEFINITELY HAVE MY VOTE!!!

Best lie Hermione has ever told. They are just so perfect together

I loved how you played this out. From bringing Victor into this, Harry forgetting his date, and that last line. Priceless.

hehe loved the ending. Twas a really good read. Made me feel all soft anf fuzzy inside..

this one was toooooo goood i realy enjoyed it after initial disapointment (jesica) but really i should've known better

hoping to read more of your one shot fics soon - keep up the good work

oooo wow!!! thia one is just way to adorable, cute, beautiful, and awe-worthy for words....i absolutely love the last two lines....
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She smiled and brought his lips back to hers. “Good idea.” She nipped at his bottom lip. “Harry?”

“Hmm?” he mumbled as their lips flirted.

“Thanks for being my first kiss.”

He frowned at her, giving her a confused look. “But I thought you said…”

“I know what I said.” She framed his face with hers and kissed him long and hard. “I lied.”
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I LOVE IT!!! and how you described the whole first kissed thing...wow my heart just melted....i wish mine was like that no fair why is it that hermione always gets the romantic and sensitive and handsome guy??? 'bout to steal harry from her too bad i dont stand a chance

Ahhhh!! That was great!! Enough to make it want to happen to you, real enough (in a sense) and the last line is awesome. Well done all around!

Ten points to ravenclaw for a well described piece of fluff. Though I would have left out the last three sentences...

That was sooo sweet! Anyway I was just reading one of ur fics and I checked out your other stories but all of your really long stories are like over PG-13 and im not quite old enough yet. I reallt liked the stories of yours I hae read so far. (I hope I didnt make a duplicate of this comment because earlier I kept clicking because it was taken forever and it said it timed out but one of them may have gone through.

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Great one-shot. Enjoyed reading it. Loved their first kiss. That whole scene was great. Keep up the good work.

Kwaaa!! Cute!! So diffenetly adorable. Meh..i'm starting to fall in love with your one-shots. Haha they make me wanna squeel from all the romance.

i loved this story - so romantic and sweet with harry being all nervous. one of my favourite one-shots

God I love how Hermione was a bit sneaky and stuff and that last line "I lied" I was like you go Hermione man good stuff good stuff