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*WOW even my critical annoying alter ego is speechless*
*HAHAHHAHAHA*
*And laughing! This is a miracle!*
*Well it's dead hilarious!*
Awww! How da*n cute was that? Not to mention DEAD hilarious! Ahhh I needed that. I have a huge grin on my face now. I love this type of humour I find Harry's PoV dead hilarious and suffice to say this was absolutely dead bloody brilliant! I was busting my guts all the way through...ok that came out wrong I was shaking with laughter. I LOVE LOVE LOVE that opening line my god I laughed soooo hard!!
'plane of reality' *breathe*
*breathe*
Great writing I truly enjoyed reading it you have great writing skills. I find that making someone laugh can be sometimes harder than crying Kudos to you it was brilliant! You captured the characters great! LOL!

xoxo
Hana

*...*
*...*
*WOW even my critical annoying alter ego is speechless*
*HAHAHHAHAHA*
*And laughing! This is a miracle!*
*Well it's dead hilarious!*
Awww! How da*n cute was that? Not to mention DEAD hilarious! Ahhh I needed that. I have a huge grin on my face now. I love this type of humour I find Harry's PoV dead hilarious and suffice to say this was absolutely dead bloody brilliant! I was busting my guts all the way through...ok that came out wrong I was shaking with laughter. I LOVE LOVE LOVE that opening line my god I laughed soooo hard!!
'plane of reality' *breathe*
*breathe*
Great writing I truly enjoyed reading it you have great writing skills. I find that making someone laugh can be sometimes harder than crying Kudos to you it was brilliant! You captured the characters great! LOL!

xoxo
Hana

Holy Moly!!!!!!!!!
That was a fantastical (i don't care if that's not a word) hilarious story!!! I laughed evry second especially I want to kill Ron Weasley and HERMIONE GRANGER JUST GRABBED MY ARSE oh my god I can't stop laughing people are giving me real weird looks liek I've gone insane but it is sooooooooooo freakin good!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWO I this story

Ah, what would we ever do without locking charms.



Now go get them married in that other story of yours ;P

I've read a lot of this kind of story... and this is different. Why ? This one give a little context around the (quite silly) game.
The eyes/lens/jumper thing is GREAT
I doubt that Harry would be so consciuos of his feelings.
Ciao!

This has got to be the hottest snog-fic I've ever read. I'm pretty sure my monitor is in nuclear meltdown or something. My only complaint is that it stopped at kissing! My God, if you can write kissing that's that hot, you could write some mind-blowing smut!

This story is so cute! I would have loved to see everyone else's faces!!

Roflmao...this was just way too funny! I couldn't stop laughing...I love it!!!!

OMG...that was so freakin' hilarious! I couldn't stop laughing! I Love It!!!

Wow. Rofl! Very interesting I'm glad I found it in the fic recs!

I loved this story! Unlike any other closet story I've heard! Shucks they really got into it! and it was all thanks to Ron.!

This is really cute! It's a well-used idea that you've turned to be a bit more believable than the usual "closet story." Good for you!

Omg. This is going straight to my favorites! I usually don't like first person fics but harry's thoughts in this and the dialogue were just so perfect and had me cracking up every other paragraph. Now I'm off to read every other fic of yours! *scurries off in search of more absolutely amazing bammaslama29 fics*

Beautiful and just hot enought to make you feel all warm and fuzzy inside, but also sweet and gentle, just like them.

wow cant' believe i missed this story.. great stuff.. im looking forward to reading ur other works